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Reviews for The Colonel

By : LemonLyman
  • From ANON - melanie on January 02, 2007
    I love the fact that it's about Sam. Because I love Sam. I liked the story, it was dark, just didn't wish she died. I am curious about the rest of the story, so please continue!
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  • From ANON - purrfus on December 30, 2006
    ch 1? Dear rabid author - Please stop and think about what you want to accomplish with your story.

    The fic comes across as a possible mental babble. Perhaps meant to reflect the concept of the last moments flashing by at incredible speed. It is however merely made more difficult to read.

    The general idea seems worth the effort, but sadly is not making it to its potential.
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