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Reviews for The Bits In Between

By : misssara11
  • From SeaChanter on February 05, 2008
    This is beautiful. Kept my interest throughout the whole story. I read the last page, the last part of the page, more than once.
    It is a wonderful piece of writing, that end.
    Good luck
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  • From Pinky01 on November 03, 2007
    i know this is the 2nd time i reviewed, but i just saw doomsday and it just broke me apart. and then reading this..i reel like im going to burst into tears, phew... angst takes a lot of of ya huh :P
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  • From Pinky01 on October 29, 2007
    This whole series is one of the best that i have ever read. Of any fanfiction series ( and i have been reading tons for about 6 years). The characters are very in character and you use the actual story to push things alone. The interludes are just marvolous and they create a real realism for the characters. in all of my mumbo jumbo this is a great series and i signed up with an aff acount just to make sure i could review it ^^
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  • From xmenloganfan on September 13, 2007
    Not sure whether or not I put in a review already but this is too good not to make sure I did.

    THIS IS AWESOME!!!!

    Rarely have I seen an interweaving around the existing story line done nearly so well. Now that I think about it I can't think of another story that I was so taken with that did this.

    Definately a keeper!!! I have extracted it off to my personal archives because there is no way I am going to risk loosings this bit of fiction.

    Great Job!

    XLF


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  • From ANON - Sadsally on January 10, 2007
    I did wonder how you were going to handle Boomtown. And you handled it nicely. good going.
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  • From sadsally on January 09, 2007
    Oh Wicked you posted on here to, i have been reading it on Fanfiction.net but now that its on here to i will stick to here, after all Adultfanfiction.net has far more possibilities. I still love this story, and how great are you for updating all the time, if only i could manage that with my stories. Truly wicked, Sadsally
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  • From ANON - AlabasterTigress on January 07, 2007
    I'm loving this so far. The interaction is sweet and it is well written. I can't wait to see more :)
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  • From ANON - Juno on January 07, 2007
    I like where this is going. Please update soon.
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