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Reviews for Betrayal

By : printerone
  • From sharky777 on July 12, 2010
    could you continue?
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  • From AngelsSin on April 24, 2008
    hi

    yous story is great good!!!
    I´ve never expected that Daniel could be such a asshole!
    how could he does this!!! and the other 2 too!!!
    I hope he feel the shame and guilty!!!
    can you please contact me when you have a new chapter???
    that would be nice

    greetings Lucifers Angel
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  • From KatrinaCarter on March 04, 2007
    *cries softly* Poor Jack!!!!

    *smacks Daniel* SHAME!!! How could he do that to him?! I thought Teal'c had more respect for Jack than that. And Cameron... The ass... He should be shot.

    Hope you write a sequel to show what goes through the minds of those three afterwards.

    Best of luck!
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  • From Chandrima on February 19, 2007
    Wow... this was a very sad story for Jack, hm? I loved how you were able to capture him just right. Nice job. ^_^ But, damnit, what was Daniel thinking??
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  • From islandseachell on January 26, 2007
    I really liked this. Good flow and I really like the way you captured O'Neill's attitude. The whole walking away and not confronting Daniel. Good characterization.
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