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By : angeljade
  • From kylielink on October 20, 2010
    loved it.
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  • From GudenMulle on September 14, 2009
    I looooved it!
    I have a strong love for Dean, he is much too nice and cute and sexy and funny for his own good XD
    Tristan.. I just can't help myself with him, he's a jackass, but I still love him :P. Damn his looks XD
    But this was just great! I realize that in this section people rarely get alot of reviews, so I thought I'd give you one, you really deserve them!
    You write really great, thank you so so much for this fic ^^
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  • From ANON - Keira on March 03, 2007
    So cute, I loved it.
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  • From ANON - From across the Pond on March 03, 2007
    And thank you very much for sharing this story with us, my dear :-) !

    It's been a great pleasure reading this fine and well-written piece of work about two young gods like Tristan / Chad and Dean / Jared in a not-always-so-smooth-but-hot-as-hell relationship, and I will look out for other stories of yours as i'm sure that you've got more goodies stashed somewhere.

    My gratitude for the entertainment (and for pairing these two up... *growles*... damn, that last scene was hot... *growls again*), and until next time.
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  • From ANON - mo on March 03, 2007
    Nice ending! You are a realy good writer! Hope you write an other story!
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  • From ANON - Alissa on February 24, 2007
    This story is awesome. I never thought I would believe a Tristan/Dean pairing, but this is good. I love it.
    Can't wait to see the next chapter.
    :-)
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  • From ANON - From across the Pond on February 22, 2007
    LOL!!! I had so much fun reading this chapter!! There was just so much healthy, good-natured humour (even in a typical "Gilmore Girls" way at that) in this, I constantly burst into fits of laughter *is still chuckling*

    How about these:

    “It’s late, honey.” She points out, looking suspiciously at each boy in turn. “Tell your friend you’ll see him tomorrow.” The evidence is right there on her face. She’s as embarrassed as them.

    “Yeah, Dean.” Tristian smirks. “Tell me you’ll see me tomorrow.”     LOL!! So something Tristian would say in this kind of situtions, never fully loosing his cocky side.


    “This is an emergency!” Tristian complains. “I have to apologise now.”

    “It can’t wait until Monday?” Rory frowns, looking at Dean for an explanation,

    “Apparently not.” Tristian mutters. “Look, Dean’s coming over and I need to apologise before he gets here, so…give me the number!”     BWAAAHAHAHAAA!!! So funny how desperate the guy is! ROTFL!

    “If you knew why he was doing it, you wouldn’t think it was that adorable, trust me.” Dean tells her, taking a sip of coffee.

    “Oooh!” Rory exclaims, grinning. “I see.”

    “What?” Lorelai asks, sitting down beside them having forced Luke to give up his quest. “What I miss?”

    “Dean’s boyfriend is well and truly under the thumb.” Rory giggles.     LOL LOL once again!! Again, this is just so typically "Gilmore Girls" in the way the lines are being said. Love it!

    And next to this healthy humour you've put a nice dose of dramatic romance, and a little bit of suspense (with Tristian's dad) into the mix as well. More than enough to make me want to read more / come back for more tasty titbits.

    Thanks a lot for the speedy update! And until next time.




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  • From ANON - lilca24 on February 22, 2007
    Damn this site! I've just written a great review but it suddenly disappeared... Okay, let's try again...

    This story is amazing. I know stories with plot take way longer to get to the sex part, but I think at least this one is worth it! And besides, it doesn't have to be that long... like 'Rich Boys', it was a short story, it had a great plot and it had some sex. Now, hopefully this story will have much more.

    Really, I can't wait to read next chap... I hope it lives up to my expectations now that Dean wants to reward Tristan. And wow, I really didn't expect that from Tristan. It seems he cares much more than he shows - and much more than I expected too.

    You are truly gifted. I've read some of your OTH stuff and they're really good too, but this one is still my fav. Well, I hope you update soon, and could you please make the chaps longer? I can't seem to get enough of this story. =)
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  • From ANON - mo on February 21, 2007
    Hey! Nice story with very good ideas!
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  • From ANON - Keira on February 21, 2007
    Am so happy they're together again, yeay Dean and Tristan. Love them. Can't wait for your next chapter
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  • From ANON - From across the Pond on February 20, 2007
    To start with: just ignore colby's comments, because this is anything but crappy writing.

    It's an unusual story within the context of Gilmore Girls, yes, but isn't that one of the reasons this website exists? To be able to write more unusual / uncommon stories about some of our favourite series / movies / ... ?

    Anyway, you're handling the difficulties between Dean and Tristan very well! You're writing credible dialogues for all participating characters (I can really "see" them saying all those lines without sounding forced), you're keeping a nice pace in the story, AND you're keeping things on edge.
    Meaning: you've been fully able to keep me interested in your story, to make me want to read and know more about how things will evolve in this unusual (but oh-so-interesting) pairing.

    Angsty relationships/romance are/is always exciting to read about (at least in my oppinion), so do keep up the good work!

    Encouraging regards,


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  • From ANON - lana on February 19, 2007
    Really good!!!
    I anxiously wait for more... you just have to update more frequently!!!
    And some sex would also be nice. ;)
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  • From ANON - Keira on February 19, 2007
    Yeay great chapter, please let Tristan and dean get back together update next chapter soon, please :)
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  • From angeljade on February 18, 2007
    crappy writing (Capital ‘C’, as it begins the sentence)

    all the way around (Doesn’t really fit in this context, but nice try)

    people (Capital ‘P’)

    like you have no business posting (Crude and inarticulate, but an amusing, if not clichéd, insult. Good job!)

    it (Must figure out those capital letters!)

    is an insult to people who actually do it well (Again, lacking effect here. Have you thought of reading a book aimed at children of a higher reading level to improve your vocabulary? Ask your teacher about it.)

    Ah, Colby. You're right! What was I thinking? Please, show me your fiction, so I may learn the art of writing. I guess my English literature degree means nothing to someone who can insult a writing style whilst ignoring the most fundamental aspects of the English language. Do you seriously have nothing better to do? If you had the guts to back yourself up, or better yet, the ability to introduce capital letters into a basic sentence, maybe I'd find you mildly interesting. As it happens, I find you quite tragic. Good luck with school and remember…sentences begin with capital letters! You can do it!
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  • From ANON - colby on February 18, 2007
    crappy writing all the way around. people like you have no business posting. it is an insult to people who actually do it well.
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