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Reviews for hannah montana cheerleading tryouts

By : dest
  • From MW007 on April 05, 2007
    Wow. Hot.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 19, 2007
    Nice action. I like the plot base for this story. You have a very nice writing style that reads very well, the timing and the decriptions are great. Keep it up. More Hanna Montana stuff would be nice.
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  • From Gumballs on February 28, 2007
    You like fetishes don't you
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  • From NJoynLife9 on February 22, 2007
    I knew I should have been a cheerleading coach. It must be very rewarding to work with such willing students :)
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  • From ANON - Deacon on February 21, 2007
    The Hannah Montana one involving rape sounds like a good story, like the one you ahve written so far.
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  • From ANON - bigfan on February 18, 2007
    please finish this story before moving on. you are doing a great job, and nobody else wrights for these characters!!!
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  • From Lumpkin on February 16, 2007
    It's pretty good. There is room for improvement but overalll it is a pretty solid story. Update

    KEEP IT GREASY
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  • From dest on February 13, 2007
    thanks. don't mind a flame. like honest opinion. i changed the format but it looks horrible. probably going to change it back. this is my first story so still not sure how to properly format the stories. thanks again for your honest opinion. were there more mistakes that weren't missed? and i might rewrite this story but i doubt it. going to stop updating this story because i want to write other stories but i will try to adjust the next few chapters with your suggestions.
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  • From ANON - person who is concerned on February 13, 2007
    This is a really good plotline... well from what I read. Which was the first chapter. And I can see Lily doing that... if it was something like OTH. But it's not, so I don't... It is still obvious you're a first time writer, due to the fact that there are little mistakes that weren't caught. It was a good fic, though it rushed into sex way too quickly. If there was more of a storyline to the fic, then it would be better. Because it just jumped right in, and I didn't get it. And I've been a smut reader for a while now. And most of the time there has to be a storyline, leading up to the smut. You're paragraphs were a little hard to read, because of the spacing, and it wasn't indented everytime someone talk (basic rule number one.) Please don't this as a flame, because it was a really good fic, everyone likes a good smut every once in a while. But this isn't good, it is, but it isn't at the same. May I suggest rewriting it, if it's a first attempt (I forgot to read the A/N.) then it's alright, I guess. But if it's like a second or third attempt, you may want to take it down and rework it. Later. Person who is concerned.
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  • From dest on February 13, 2007
    i really can't think of a way to get oliver or maddie in this story. i may write a different story with them but this story has been written inside my head since christmas. i made a huge change by taking out crossover and that is just because i knew it would be really hard to write her in and it probably wouldn't make much sense. eventually i will probably write a suite life story with maddie. i think after i put part 3B of this story up i am going to take a break from disney for a while though. i have a war at home story i want to do and a few dbz stories.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 11, 2007
    do not do a crossover. it ruins stories
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  • From ANON - Gummy Balls on February 10, 2007
    Hey, its me but Im not logged in. You should include Ashley Tisdale(Maddy) in your stories. That would rock! I'll be looking forward to more chapters.
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  • From Gumballs on February 07, 2007
    Oh BTW now that I read it think you can add Oliver in there? I dont really like Jake but Oliver rockz. Not in that kind of way though cuz I no gay
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  • From Gumballs on February 07, 2007
    Yay chapter 2
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  • From StoryJunkie on February 07, 2007
    I wasn't familiar with this show, but you sure had my eyebrows raised.
    At first I thought, right, the girl with the boobs gets the job. Figures.
    But mostly, I just enjoyed the fantasy along with you. It was pretty hot.
    There were very few errors (thank you!) and some paragraphs were just too long, so I skipped them, but otherwise, ...well, let's say I want to lay back and smoke a cigarette.
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