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Reviews for Doctor's Soul mate

By : Nicfawks
  • From Lara_Kal-El on November 12, 2015
    I have to say. The idea was good.... but that was about it. You need to work on your grammar, spelling and a few other things. In time I think you'll be a great writer though, so get a beta and rewrite this with some assistance till you get a good flow.
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  • From ANON - Avy on January 31, 2013
    this is crazy did you write this when you were high?
    Th idea is essentially good but its.. its.. too cracked written as it was.
    Try rewriting it, with technique and proper paragraphing and plot development.
    And try to follow some kind of logic.

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  • From Genuka on October 05, 2012
    The formatting could do with some improvement but its a good story that I'm greatly enjoying.
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  • From xmenloganfan on September 13, 2007
    Your story has a lot of potential but you need to lengthen your time frames and consider consequences. Think about what you have put your female character though is she reacting in a normal manner? Is the Doctor? My recommendation get yourself a good beta to help you out with sanity checks, OOC (out of character) things and grammar.

    NO one becomes a stellar writer over night but if you stick with it I am sure you can get there. Like any art form it takes work and practice. If you want to pursue further stories and want help drop me an email and I would be glad to help. After 30 years of following the series I have a pretty good sense of typical Dr. behaviors.
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  • From shaydshanidepp on March 28, 2007
    I say that was a good first Nic I was so nervous about my first! way detailed on the sex bit gives me better ideas for my Dream David!
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