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Reviews for Delicious Sin

By : moit
  • From chibikitten on May 10, 2007
    Ok... I don't intend to sound mean or anything, but... what was that?? I can deal with PWP's, really, I even those the little bastards, they're good for a good old sexy entertainment, but really, and though you have a simple and nice writing style, in this fic Lex and Clark was so... mechanic. Really, when you really look into the fic, there's no passion or feeling, Lex almost acted as though he was being FORCED into being with Clark, there's no preambules or that Clark/Lex tension, it seemed like they were talking about the weather rather than about to get laid, it was like 'streap and get on the bed', really, what was Clark to Lex?? his whore, or a virgin about to be unvirginized?? The way you put those two into action completely turned me off, and that's hard, cause I am a GREAT Clex fan... try to detail things a little more, make them with a little more feeling, it doesn't have to be a fluff or romantic novel type of things, just more descriptive and less.... separated from the act itself, or when you have sex, is it just a mechanical to you?? If it is, please just pay no attention to this review...
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