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Reviews for Summer Daze

By : karraselle
  • From thmanwithnoname on September 16, 2008
    I liked the story. I didn't think summer did it, but I wasn't expecting the twin bit. Nicely done. Wouldn't have minded another scene between her and bobby, tho.
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  • From amazingenthusiasto on July 19, 2007
    The first two chapters began with so much promise. Perfect use of professional language, and Goran was very in-character. With the introduction of Summer, a supposed...35 year old? You've brought to the story a startling amount of immaturity: the banter between the bandmates, Summer herself, they all read like the fantasy of a Sophomore in high school. I must admit that I was very let down by this, and it turned me off from finding out about Esther's fate.

    As for Goran, he made some decidedly un-Goranlike decisions in your story. I'm not sure that he could bring himself not to feel completely guilty/nervous about a one night stand with a girl of Summer's obvious..."sexual freedom." I have a feeling he would be a tad panicked, especially if they didn't use some sort of protection. However, the show doesn't highlight any kind of relationships that he might have, so who knows?

    Anyway, good luck with this story. I think it has real promise, so I'm sorry if I'm coming across as kind of bitchy. I just wanted it to be better, and I know you can do it.

    ~AmazingEnthusiasto
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