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Reviews for The Bite that Changes Everything

By : LadyofTheWhiteWater
  • From queen-of-secrets on September 22, 2012
    hey I've fond this fic here a couple of weeks ago and i usually don't read this type of fanfics I'm old enough to read them but by choice i don't.
    i expected it to be like other adult materials and that is as you may know plot less. well I've decided to give it a shot even though i never read an adultfic before but having the pairing be Chip/Vida(my absolute favorite in the past few years) helped a lot

    i can't say how glad i am to have found it it's one of the best fan work out there and I'm not just talking about PR but many other shows and books i loved reading it and i kept going back through every chapter i loved the plot and character and how realistic it all seemed (even if it's about a vampire couple) and since we're all grown ups here I'll say the smut was great and very hot and i needed to keep going seriously it wasn't like most fics that write it without a plot or storyline like it doesn't even need to have any as long as it has sexual materials in it (i wouldn't mind reading anything that has a Chip/Vida pairing) but having it be this great and interesting is certainly a plus

    i joined this site just to write this review to you because you simply deserve it i don't know if you'll ever read this or if you use this site anymore but if you do i want you to know that it's a great work absolutely amazing i felt everything you were trying to send and over all i really loved it but my heart was broken at that last chapter when i saw the update date was last year and that means you didn't get any inspiration to keep it going for a long time

    i still have hope that you might update soon so i decided to write this review telling you how great it is and asking you to please please please please try to if even for my sake i know I'm just someone you don't know and we might have passed each other at any moment without knowing but this fic really really touched me like nothing else, so deep down i just have to read more of it if even one more chapter please try to update please have you ever been addicted to a book or series or even a person and then it would suddenly stop that's me right now so please update just write whatever you want even if it's incomplete or has horrible grammar and just post it please please i know this seems crazy to you but i really want to have more i've never felt this crazy about something before please try to keep going
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  • From BrandonB on February 25, 2008
    hey, nice fic. I make it a habit to read the stuff that belongs to other people who review my stuff. Seems to make it a fair share, ya dig? LoL! Anyhoo, I enjoyed your fic. Awesome. I didn't watch to much of MF, but from what I did, I defiantly noticed the love of Chip/Vida. Awesome job expanding on the vampire episode... especially with the lemon bits, lol!

    To answer your question, yes I do write at the PIT (never heard it called that before). My profile is http://www.fanfiction.net/~blanks
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  • From darkgoddesstheimmortal on June 23, 2007
    *jaw drops* This....this...THIS IS AMAZING. It was so elegantly written, so beautifully done. It's so realistic and powerful and just WOW. Bravo!
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  • From DJRocca on May 22, 2007
    HOT!!!!!!! More please! ^_^
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