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Reviews for Bend Over

By : EmperoroftheNetherlandsII
  • From PrincessL on October 03, 2010
    That was really good! Your writing is excellent! Please continue!
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  • From Shawndra on May 28, 2009
    Well That was an interesting story I supose. As I see you are giving this story to adoption. Depite your reasonings in doing so that was a poor move as an author. I supose I will take a crack at this story. I should have a desent chapter out in two weeks. Regarding the reviewer known as "Dae". You should wright some for yourselve before you go and critisize people for their works. As I said before, I will have this story rewritten in two weeks on my profile.

    With much respect,



    The Prince of Madness
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  • From canaryman32779 on December 09, 2008
    I like the concept for your story, really. But (not trying to offend) your writing style is a bit questionable to me. Your sex scenes are the longest feature of the story, and while that's not necessarily a terrible thing, it does detract from any story. In fact, if I took all the chapters you have written (minus your Author's Note chapters, which I consider very unprofessional) that would probably make one GOOD chapter. You need to extend the story. It can't just be "Fuck. Ass fuck. Tranny+Guy fuck." There needs to be PLOT. Additionally, your requests for reviews are understandable. However, your RANSOMING (that's what it is) of your story for reviews is unacceptable. You want reviews, go ahead and say 'Reviews are appreciated'. Never EVER say 'Give me reviews, or I'll stop writing.' That's just terrible form.
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  • From on March 17, 2008
    its been over a month still waiting
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  • From bimorgan on March 05, 2008
    please bring the next chapter out this story is soo good
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  • From on February 06, 2008
    can u plz update pritty plz with a cherry on top
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  • From on January 19, 2008
    when r u goin to update
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  • From BigWill on January 07, 2008
    Plz continue this story :):)
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  • From machoman90 on November 09, 2007
    it was awsome,i mean damn!
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  • From BigWill on November 01, 2007
    Me Likie. Take your time and continue this story.
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  • From on October 18, 2007
    i love the story CONTINUE CONTINUE!!!
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  • From punker9000 on October 15, 2007
    yo dude - great story.. i made this account just to tell you to continue, its a very kinky and good story but i feel that most people fear to comment a work with transgender aspects in it, dont worry about people... you have hits =P
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  • From BigWill on October 14, 2007
    I really like this story. I would like for you to continue it and involve some conflict between Ned and Suzie and/or Ned/Suzie/Moze. I think that this would be a great story if you continue it.
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  • From on October 14, 2007
    please keep going your story is great
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  • From BigWill on September 24, 2007
    Come on, keep it up with this story. I want to see something new here :)
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