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Reviews for Family Emergency

By : Bloodylocks
  • From navajo on November 14, 2009
    Hate it and love it at the same time....can't wait for more
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  • From amandalee on November 08, 2009
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    Okay, so I really have enjoyed your story so far. I love the plot and everything. The only thing is about the baby. A lot of people do this when it comes to incestuous pairings in fanfic and it really takes away from the story, at least for people like me. This is pretty much just an fyi, but inbreeding once isn't all that bad, genetically speaking. If two siblings who haven't had a bunch of incest in their family beforehand indeed got pregnant, then the offspring actually has the same amount of a chance of being deformed or having something wrong with it as any other baby, not exclusive to those that are inbred. You actually need inbreeding on inbreeding on inbreeding on inbreeding to actually raise the chances of deformity even by a marginal percentage. Take purebred dogs for instance - at the creation of all breeds, relatives would all be bred to each other to strengthen the traits that the creator(s) of the breed desired, as inbreeding strengthens all good genes. The only reason that there's so many health problems in dogs now is because they were inbred TOO much and if there's a bad gene, with enough inbreeding, it's going to become a strong bad gene. However, if the bad gene isn't already there, then it's not just going to appear because two people who are related procreated. Sorry, but this is just a huge pet peeve of mine when people are dealing with inbreeding, so I just had to share the knowledge. Other than that, I really enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing.

    I can only say that you are very wrong about the risks of inbreeding producing a disabled child. Have you ever studied genetics? I have, and I can tell you that almost every individual carries a certain amount of recessive genes that do not effect our health in a negative way. However, if these genes come in two sets (and close relatives, especially siblings, are very likely to have the same set of "bad" recessive genes) they can cause severe disability in the person affected.

    I suggest you read this article: http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/6424937.stm

    I recently saw a documentary on that particular couple in Germany, and out of their four children, two are mentally disabled. So don't try to say that a child conceived by two siblings have the same chance of turning out normal as any other kid, since that is complete and utter bull.

    I wish you would actually read up on a subject before speaking out.
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  • From superhiro on October 29, 2009
    Okay, so I really have enjoyed your story so far. I love the plot and everything. The only thing is about the baby. A lot of people do this when it comes to incestuous pairings in fanfic and it really takes away from the story, at least for people like me. This is pretty much just an fyi, but inbreeding once isn't all that bad, genetically speaking. If two siblings who haven't had a bunch of incest in their family beforehand indeed got pregnant, then the offspring actually has the same amount of a chance of being deformed or having something wrong with it as any other baby, not exclusive to those that are inbred. You actually need inbreeding on inbreeding on inbreeding on inbreeding to actually raise the chances of deformity even by a marginal percentage. Take purebred dogs for instance - at the creation of all breeds, relatives would all be bred to each other to strengthen the traits that the creator(s) of the breed desired, as inbreeding strengthens all good genes. The only reason that there's so many health problems in dogs now is because they were inbred TOO much and if there's a bad gene, with enough inbreeding, it's going to become a strong bad gene. However, if the bad gene isn't already there, then it's not just going to appear because two people who are related procreated. Sorry, but this is just a huge pet peeve of mine when people are dealing with inbreeding, so I just had to share the knowledge. Other than that, I really enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 30, 2008
    Hahaha..empathy belly...genius!
    I'm glad you've continued this story.
    Not sure if I reviewed before. If I haven't then I apologize
    profusely. It really is a sweet, well-written fic.
    Please continue further.

    Tons of support
    ~WR
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  • From Roquet on February 18, 2008
    this has to be one of the most captivating/sad/interesting fics i have read in a long time! please continue!
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