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Reviews for Dark Angel: What if?

By : supman
  • From ANON - Anon on June 04, 2009
    You should really update. I really love the scenarios that you come up with.
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  • From Safir84 on May 04, 2009
    Okay, so I'm only gonna leave a review for "HELLO, GOODBYE", because that's the only one I liked, I'm an avid Max/Alec shipper, so, there ya go! The plot was pretty good, as well as the little interaction between Max/Alec. The the smut or in this case; porn was pretty damn hot, I'll give you that! Kudos!

    More so, I guess I should mention a few of my thoughts on: "DESIGNATE THIS", it was a bit too N/C for me and well, twisted for my taste, specially towards the end, oh well!


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  • From ANON - recicup on September 10, 2008
    OMG!!! You have a knack for this stuff. I even checked out the Chyoo story. *thud* Anyway, I don't have any particular request other than to please keep updating this whenever you can. K, I need to go get my oxygen tank and maybe even the crash cart....
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  • From ANON - Frank on August 08, 2008
    Love it!

    more ncon stuff please
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 30, 2008
    Update!
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  • From ANON - blikst on July 19, 2008
    I really liked the last chapter even though Walter never has been a huge favourit of mine ;)

    Also I have a suggestion for a story. In 'Love among the runes' Max gets captured by White and is handcuffed to the ceiling as White rips her shirt of to look at her runes. It could be fun if that turns into a sexual story.

    Looking forward for your updates in any case.
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  • From in2itivelady on July 09, 2008
    As you already know, I loved this chapter! It was exactly what I was hoping to read. Very well done, with a nice touch of humor at the end. I also really liked how you kept the tension up with her feelings for Alec and Logan and the other men in her life, without making the Kendra/Walter session too uncomfortable to read. I always felt that with Kendra being a rather openly sexual person, that it was only natural that at some point she and her Mr. Multiples would like to share the wealth with the repressed roomie haha--Not to mention that Kendra's rather open-ended disappearance from the show in season 2 was more than frustrating. But anyways another fantastic installment. I can't wait to read what's coming up next!
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  • From ANON - SandZ on July 07, 2008
    Good update with chapter 7.

    I really like the idea about a multi-part story with max being brainwashed.
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  • From ANON - Kamber on June 26, 2008
    i like it. update please!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 23, 2008
    i like it. one thing that i want to see is a max/lydecker scene. we never really get to read one of those and i think it could be possible, especially at the end of the first season. can't wait to see what you have next
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  • From in2itivelady on June 22, 2008
    Hey, I'm totally loving this fic right now--mindless and plotless as it is, haha. Anyways, it's a lot of fun and I just really got into it recently and I can't wait to see what you have coming up next.

    As for requests, I would love to see a threesome with Kendra and her Mr. Multiples. Or, fastforwarding to season 2 Gill Girl, I would totally love to see Max having to "perform" at the Blowfish Tavern--with Alec would be preferred, but I'm totally open to her and others, perchance with Alec acting as voyeur and she's performing for him, teasing? Take from that what you will and run with it :)
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  • From ANON - Don on June 22, 2008
    Interesting. Normally, I don't go for compilations like this, but I'm really liking yours. This last chapter was a little sinister in some ways, but I still liked it. I can't wait to read your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - TJ on June 21, 2008
    update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 21, 2008
    Great chapter! Your work is really good. We don't get to ready many stories like this one. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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  • From ANON - opin on June 03, 2008
    Chapter 5 is a little brief-it would go great on Chyoo.com.

    I agree with your sentiments on the defanged season 2 manticore.
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