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Reviews for Fool

By : Merrov
  • From gustav on June 07, 2008
    This short tale has a lot of potential to enable you to take the basic plot and flesh out the bones. From reading this I would surmise that Daniel has already went to Jack's bed. In doing so Jack changed the way he reated to Daniel and compensate by flirting with Sam in order to hide their secret. Daniel has ben confused and hurt by Jack's reactions and over time little by litle Jack has killed Daniel's feelings for him, even though Daniel knows and ubderstands the reason for his behaviour. It could also read that Jack and Daniel have never consummated their relationship as yet but Daniel is aware just what Jack truly feels for him. Jack's venture into Sam's bed and heart have made Daniel lose a bit of respect for Jack as he knows Jack is using Sam to hide from his own sexuality order to maintain his career. It is not the relationship that Daniel resents but the way that Jack exploits the fact that Sam is truly in love with him and he carries on to bed her not loving her. Whichever way Jack has killed the love of Daniel and lost his respect. Hell of an angst here

    Great idea keep going and well written

    Ladyaph
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