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Reviews for Fast Lane

By : SpecialFX
  • From ANON - Rachel on March 14, 2009
    This is grate, you should write a sequel!
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  • From shatzen83 on September 30, 2008
    Hane't read it for a while, the last two chapters even better than the previous ones. The ending was just perfect. Bravo!
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  • From ANON - Abby on September 16, 2008
    I absolutely loved your story. It was amazing. Totally hot. Awesome job
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  • From ANON - Helena on August 25, 2008
    omg this was so good, i m really sad it ended! Great ending by the way and great chapter overall, i am sooooooooo glad someone at last dared to go by the hurting route and make it actually believable, cause almost everyone else , when it comes to Clois sex, writes as bit too soft, and considering Clark's power and the fact that when he is on Red K he has no inhibitions, it wouldn't be believable if written the common way.

    I would really love to read more Clois stories from you whenever you have the inspiration. Your writing is different and stands out.
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  • From ANON - tasha on August 11, 2008
    Great story! Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Helena on July 04, 2008
    awww i loved this chapter so much! It was both intense and sweet. Kal seems to be a bit calmer than usual around her. I am waiting to see if he will unleash at some point his more arrogant side, infuriating her lol great writing as always.
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  • From ANON - Helena on June 22, 2008
    Great hot chapter, i liked the references to Lois' past. Now some Kalois action, please? :)
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  • From ANON - Helena on April 30, 2008
    This second chapter was just superb! I m in awe by your skills in writing smut, cause you manage to write it with some meaning you know? Not just sex scenes the one after the other, there is some depth there , in the dialogs and characters. Awesome chapter, can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Spaniard on April 28, 2008
    I love it so far! Please update soon
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  • From alysonlindley on April 26, 2008
    THAT WAS REALLY HOT
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  • From ANON - Helena on April 10, 2008
    omg this is awesome! I can't describe how much happy i am that it is not an one shot. Beautiful writing as always. I m a little confused on why Clark called himself Clark and not Kal, however i take it that it was your choice. Anywho, very hot story, can't wait for the update.
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  • From shatzen83 on April 07, 2008
    I love your story, they are both horny yet immature, horny kids. But seriously, as I brought that already, you have the gift of catching the right rhythm of the story, keeping th e right tempo, like everything a little bit fast forward, as the reader was on their place, hm... like being slightly aroused, maybe? Or maybe just falling in love? Staring at the ither person with eyes wide open? Love it, update soon.
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  • From alysonlindley on April 07, 2008
    I like it so far very hot
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  • From JohnSlayer on April 07, 2008
    I loved it! HOT HOT HOT!


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