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Reviews for Incubus

By : Hnoss
  • From ANON - Velvet Mace on August 20, 2010
    I really enjoyed the first 10 chapters of this story. It was sexy and exciting. I thought the religious aspects were done well. But best of all I absolutely loved the voice you had for Cain, he was fun and scary and enjoyably evil. It had all kinds of potential for an interesting and satisfying plot where the team somehow overcomes Cain despite his biblical powers.

    The last two chapters, I'll be honest, they weren't up to your earlier potential. They seemed phoned in. The songs really broke up the mood and wrecked pacing of your writing, instead of being able to sink into the story, I kept being distracted by writing that wasn't yours and had nothing to do with your story. But everything up to that point, I liked a lot.

    I know it's been a long time since you wrote on this and you've moved on to other things, but I just thought I'd tell you that enjoyed this, because it deserves some love.
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  • From ANON - Ladygreeneyes on May 16, 2009
    I luuurve this story...so sorry no-one else has reviewed. You have a fantastic imaginative and creative talent and deserve some credit for it! Your original characters are so well-drawn and sexy (did I mention sexy!?!) Oh, yes...I did!! The whole thing is realistic, entertaining and FUNNY to boot! I do hope you keep going with this, I love 'Torchwood' and I think you have managed to capture the essence (no pun intended?!)of the characters and storyline...What you have done with Ianto has me in stitches...Queen of the tea-makers! Looking forward to more and I wish they would televise this...it would make fab viewing but alas I have to make do with the images in my head...;)
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