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Reviews for Nightfall

By : modeac
  • From ANON - opin on May 20, 2010
    Did i read right that in the next chapter of Domination- that i hope will come soon there is a m/f/f threesome AND lesbian incest? The naruto/hinata thing could be interesting even though its been done a hundred times before. The database thing was interesting- really shows you've put depth into this story.
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  • From ANON - moresexplease on May 19, 2010
    I've always been a fan of AU stories dealing with what would of happened if Max never escaped. The way you incorporated Max's sexuality into her missions definitely peaked my interest. Awesome to see you updating again, had almost given up hope that I'd ever be able to read more of the this story. While the new chapter was mostly back story it definitely gave some cool insight into the characters and what they've been doing.

    Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - in2itivelady on August 12, 2009
    Great start! I really enjoyed your take on the DA universe and the ways in which the transgenics are different from their use on the show. It only makes sense that Manticore would create sexy assassins in order to use their sexuality to get their target. And everyone loves stories about a sexy assassin willing to do anything to complete the mission!

    I'm also really looking forward to your Max and Alec dynamic. Your notes indicated that this is going to be an MA fic, but not to expect fluff...so I'm really interested in the kind of play they're into. Something tells me they're into the kinky stuff, haha.

    Anyways, great job. I look forward to what you've got coming up next!
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  • From ANON - lips on July 24, 2009
    awesome!
    please update soon
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  • From ANON - nhoel on July 06, 2009
    That was hot as hell! I enjoyed it very much. Big fan of fics where Max is still in that mercenary type life. Can't wait to see where you take it.



    "why would Manticore genetically engineer a super soldier in female form to look like a super model if they weren’t planning to play the ‘seduction’ or ‘exploit human sexism’ cards?"

    Very true, and it's nice to see someone develop this idea a little more. I mean, Looking how Max does, or how any X5 looks for that matter plus the whole 'heat' thing it's not a stretch to believe Manticore's goals for Max or any x5 involved using their bodies to achieve missions. For something that is supposed to be as evil as Manticore I find it hard to believe they wouldn't make sure their solders weren't willing to do anything to complete a mission.
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