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Reviews for Leveling the Score

By : shikiblade
  • From Krulos on November 03, 2018

    Chapter #1:

    This was hilarious, from the passage where Ducky says to Tony "... it's not that you're mentally devoid..." regarding his foolish tactics, to Ziva completely enjoying this encounter; for predictable reasons, to the online photographs of, one of which shows the immediate after-effects of McGee punching Tony over the desk for insinuating that McGee is in fact a homosexual- something that, by and large, will ensure being punched, rather hard, come to think of it (that idea is a massive insult).

    All in all, I love this piece, and it seems Ziva's going to be into a bit of office-blackmail, come to think of it. Seeing as how she got Abby to forward to Tony the photos she took of the antics between McGee and Tony.


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  • From ANON - Syret on August 08, 2012
    Great story!!!
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  • From cazic2324 on December 27, 2011
    That was excellent, good balance typos far and in between. And i could completely see that as an episode while i read it.
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  • From ANON - Andrea on June 21, 2010
    It's obvious you're a McGee girl and that's good but please don't make him look like the poor boy who never gets what he wants because lately Tim is just an ass. Tim acts like he's better than other and if that was true then he wouldn't need to show it.
    I like your fic, it's a interesting idea but you write everyone like they should treat Tim like their king. TIm is not perfect.
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  • From cowgirl65 on June 14, 2010
    I like the way Tim is working through his thoughts. the way you divide up the chapter to include different POVs makes it easy to follow. I'm looking forward to continuing this read!
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  • From ANON - Ryan on June 01, 2010
    Yay, another update! Poor Tony though, can't wait to see Tim kick some major ass!
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  • From ANON - Ryan on May 19, 2010
    Are you gonna continue this story? I've been dying to know what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Ryan on April 29, 2010
    I like the progression of the relationship between Tim and Tony. I hope Tim can convince Tony that seeking out an exclusive relationship with him wouldn't be such a bad thing.
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  • From ANON - Ryan on April 27, 2010
    Another great chapter! I love the growing relationship between Tim and Tony. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From GudenMulle on April 10, 2010
    Oh dear. I like :). Gibbs was maybe a tad out of character, but screw that, I think that this is a quite intruiqing story! And I'm REALLY looking forward to reading about what will happen between Tim and Tony. Now, I don't even know if this is the direction in which you're heading, but even though Tim is a strong character and person in this fic, I don't think that Tony would bottom to him. The only person I see Tony doing that for is Gibbs. I'm glad that Abby and Tim made up, it hurt my heart to see those two fight. Even though none of them respect the others boundaries and private things XD. I hope you continue soon, I'm really curious :P
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  • From ANON - Ryan on April 09, 2010
    While I'm glad that Tim won the fight, I kinda wish it was more one-sided, but that fact that Tim was holding back makes up for it. I can't wait to see what Tim has in store for Tony. I do have a question though. What's the slash pairing in the story? You mentioned that Gibbs was slightly attracted to Tim, but then you said that he mainly goes for women.
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  • From ANON - Ryan on April 07, 2010
    I hope McGee beats Tony completely and thoroughly. Tony deserves an imasculating ass whooping for all the crap he put McGee through all these years. And great job having McGee putting Abby in her place, I diddn't like how she treats him and gets away with it.
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