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Reviews for Io

By : ragincajun1980
  • From cowgirl65 on October 08, 2010
    Really like your protagonist,seems like a real person.

    His conversation feels very natural except for the ... they get in the way of the story. a good way to end an unfinished thought, but I think the story would flow better without.

    looking forward to the next part
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