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Reviews for The Bodyguard

By : SunFirenze
  • From Kuragari75 on January 03, 2012
    Well i actually really like your idea! ^^ so far it's very good. But i'm going to ask something and I don't want you to be offended or anything I'm just pointing it out. Is English your first language? It's just there's a lot of grammatical errors that sort of take away from the story itself. I guess I was just wondering if you would like a beta reader to go through and correct some of them for you. I'd be happy to if you'd like. Not to change anything in your story, it's great, just to get some of the errors out of there so maybe some people will have an easier read of it. I just thought I'd offer and once again I really do enjoy your story. If you're at all interested you can email me. leobdollin75@yahoo.com once more, love the story so far! Love to see where you take it!
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