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Reviews for Never Say Never

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  • From ANON - Doppelfisch on June 02, 2015
    I have a feeling you wrote this excitedly, which is great and the energy shows! The only downside to that is the occasional typos and then direction of who is doing what. There were a few instances where you would write that Aeryn reached down to grab him, and then in the next sentence, it would be confused with "he" held "his" manhood, that sort of thing. One last point of critique was a Farscape universe concern. In the first chapter, you have Aeryn say what she wouldn't give for a hot shower, or a cold one, as opposed to the sonic shower. She was one of the Sebaceans who was actually born on a ship, she states that in an episode midway through season 1, in fact. This would suggest that she might not know what a water-based shower actually feels like because on a space carrier, there wouldn't be a need for something with such an esoteric system like water in pipelines and the concern of gray water afterwards. If you want her to keep the shower comment, mention about an experience she had while on assignment or on leave where she had the opportunity to exercise her curiosity on how a real water shower might feel.

    Enough with the critiquing part, let me get to everything else that was a joy to read! Story-wise, nice and concise and brought full circle to a tasty conclusion. I felt, too, that you had a pretty damn good knack for grasping the right sort of mentality of Aeryn's internal dialog, and the omniscient POV of the story as well. Basically, lots of good words (though perhaps some of them were a little over-used. Undulated is a great word, but there is more than one way to describe a wavelike motion, or swell, or billow, or ripple or writhe, etc). It was very steamy too in just the right way, the tempo of both the self-stimulation scene and the actual sex scenes between both characters flowed and had good punching gusto to them. Good job. Thank you so much for sharing! I am exhausted, so I apologize in advance if I have my own share of typos or if any of my sentences do not make sense. Anyhow, thanks again!
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  • From ANON - TheShadowD on January 13, 2012
    Awesome fic!

    I think that You have seen lot's of Farscape because You catch "The Hard Times" between Aeryn and John.

    You should post this to www.terrafirmascapers.com , most active Farscape forum today, I think You would get much more reviews that in here.


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