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Reviews for The Bargain

By : sugarkisses
  • From Hazail on August 11, 2016

    I loved it.. you are right on point with daryl it's amazing.. can't wait for part 2


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  • From Ambrosia on June 24, 2015
    Hello! Having read what you have here so far, I have got to say, I loved the segment of their developing relationship where they hid and denied their deepening feelings for one another. It was believable and, I though, in-character for Daryl at the time. He tends to wear his heart on his sleeve though (and act on it directly) and I think you've captured him pretty good. I'd love to see you write more detail in your chapters, do a little more world-building. (SPOILER for Season 2!)I look forward to seeing you continue this, I love The Walking Dead and am totally interested in seeing how you handle the group getting split up. What's going to happen with Daryl and Abby? Will they get separated from one another? From the group? o.0 what if the Governor finds her?!? What if they were separated from both the group and one another? I can't wait to find out!
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  • From ANON - Amanda on March 31, 2015
    Desperately need this story to go on!
    The relationship between the two characters is amazing. I love how she fell for him despite her deal. And I love how he in turn is falling for her. Please please please write more on this!
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  • From NatKatt on May 06, 2013
    Just read The Bargain and wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it.
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  • From ANON - Savannah Collier on April 19, 2013
    I love your stories! First the Punk/Star story, now this one! You write it out in such a way that I can imagine it! (I have a very vivid imagination!) haha But I love it! Keep up the amazing stories!!!
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  • From ANON - Mmmona on December 14, 2012
    This story is great. I love evrything from the plot to the dialogue, it's awesome. Hope to see chapter 9 soon.
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  • From ANON - SouChanDevo on November 08, 2012
    A cute little ficlet you've got going here. It's really sweet the way you've gotten them together. I hope to read more from you :)
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  • From intoxthexlight on September 26, 2012
    This is an amazing story! I'm really loving it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 13, 2012
    Amazing!! Hope to read more soon!!
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  • From ANON - Miss Lynxx on June 01, 2012
    Wow this is a great story. I really hope you update very very soon! I wanna see where this relationship go.
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  • From PrinceEmbree_ on April 30, 2012
    I absolutely adore this.
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  • From ANON - Killer K on April 01, 2012
    " You're my girl." *sighhhhh* May I say what a fan-frickin tastic chapter! You are doing a wonderful job blending Abby in with the story line of the show. Kuddos to you, dearie!!! Happy writing!
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  • From ANON - Killer K on March 23, 2012
    I was so happy to see a new chapter up! Chapter 6 was great - I'm really excited to see where you take this story! Great writing!
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  • From ANON - Killer K on March 18, 2012
    This story is AWESOME!!! Love The Walking Dead and LOOOVE Daryl! So can't wait to see where this is going! Please update as soon as possible! Happy writing!
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  • From LittleMissRachel007 on March 11, 2012
    Really enjoyed reading this so far, keep up the great work.
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