Reviews for A different kindnessBy : Topkat |
Wow! What a story! Your descriptive writing really makes the characters come to life and the sex scene seem so very real and immediate.
I like that your Todd is quite dark - not so humanised and nice as in some other stories.
I’m curious to know what the title of your story means. A different kindness as in how he wants to mark her as his once he takes over Atlantis and, to him, this would be showing her kindness? Would it elevate her status to be marked as his?
Have you written any other stories that continue this storyline? I’d love to read a story where Todd takes over Atlantis!
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