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Reviews for An Unexpected Turn Of Events

By : SpecialFX
  • From Tricky_Dick on March 04, 2020

    Very Good story.  Very descriptive about feelings and sensations...  Honestly, although I'm sure Veronica likes Weevil, it would take more than a $100 laptop deal to get her to sleep with him.  But you go with the story.  I would have tried to find something more personal to get her to give up the pussy.  Unless..... you wrote in there something that shows there was more sexual tension than was revealed on the show.... because I honestly felt like it was more mutual respect for each other's abilities and willingness to get the job done and make some $$$

    That being said.... I would LOVE to read a sequal to this story as I could see Weevil being a secret guilty pleasure for Veronica.... just as Lily had the secret affair with him.  It would make sense because 1. Veronica would CERTAINLY not want anyone at school to know.... AND definitely not her father.  And 2. She and Lily had so much in common.... It might be a bizarre emotional connection to her.... and of course, Weevil isn't exactly a poor lover.  He seems to know his way around a woman... AND he also knows how to keep a secret.  

    Maybe Veronica wants to pretend like it didn't happen.... at first... but she keeps having vivid sex dreams about Weevil making love to her.

    Then they end up teaming up on a case and possibly Veronica is in some real danger from the Fitzpatrick's.... Weevil saves her.... and she cries... because she's human.... and then end up sleeping together again which starts their strange, secret, passionate love affair.... until they are later discovered.... maybe even by her dad.  haha.

    GREAT STORY!


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  • From ANON - Rae on March 15, 2014
    I think you should continue . I loved it!
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