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Reviews for Here's to You, Mr. Lopez

By : quinnfabraysmut
  • From Agrinho on September 24, 2014
    This was such a perfect chapter.

    I loved how there's so much variation, and you never take anything too far. I also adored the amount of chest worship in this fic, it's one of my favourites.

    I'm kind of sad to see this end because it was so awesome and I definitely think there's story material here, but I'm also grateful that I got three chapters.

    You're a perfect prompt filler and I hope you never stop writing Quinn/Santiago. You write them amazingly well.
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  • From Agrinho on September 19, 2014
    Oh, and I also wouldn't mind Santiago testing if she can take four of his fingers now that she's used to his bigger dick (building up finger by finger), giving her mouth/neck/tits some love while he's at it. Not required, just an idea, I'm fine if you don't use it :)
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  • From Agrinho on September 19, 2014
    It seems to me that whenever I think that your fic is so hot, it just gets hotter.

    This is fantastic and keeps getting better. I like the time jump between the chapters as well, it really works here. And it's so fucking hot that they've been having so much sex, like they can't get enough of each other.
    This is once again a story I'll be sad to ever see end, which makes it kind of a dilemma since I'm looking forward to a new chapter so much.

    The little interludes with Quinn's friends lusting after her and the idea of her with Mr Lopez are a nice touch - it's funny, it's never overbearing and it gets some stuff said.

    This is insanely hot and ridiculously good. What would also be ridiculously hot would be the use of whipped cream to kiss or on Quinn's body or on Santiago's (but no mixing whipped cream and cum, can't imagine that'd taste very good). Just an idea, absolutely not required.

    I didn't mind that Santiago mentioned taking her from behind in the text, I think it was a nice way to get the position in there without actually writing it. I'm don't hold a grudge against it, it's not a trigger - it's just something I'm not that into. If you don't mind, I'd prefer no reverse cow girl either, unless it's short and he holds her tits as they do it.

    Just always, always keep writing Quinn/Santiago. Never ever stop. You are beyond talented and I am SO lucky you're taking my prompts. All hail to you. Also, my firstborn.
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  • From Agrinho on September 17, 2014
    Hi, I'm the one who requested the prompt. I'm really excited you filled this one since you also filled another prompt of mine (This Cock is Mine) and did it perfectly.

    I'm really loving every single word in this. I like how I see so many things I asked for or just generally things I really like, but still the story is unexpected in ways that makes it exciting. I like your pace and your mix of story and smut - it's a perfect balance. The smut is totally hot and I'm really happy with Mr Lopez loving Quinn's tits so much. I'm really happy with everything. This is perfect and you should never stop writing Quinn/Santiago!


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