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By : ItwasMerlin

From ANON - It was merlin on October 18, 2015
I had one idea involving Carina but I'm not ready to bring her in yet . The reason I want something like that so Morgan can have a lot longer than a few hours with her . Especially for something like the performance act he definitely wouldn't want that rushed . For some reason i always forget princes leia outfit , good choice though
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From ANON - Mufc87 on October 18, 2015
Yeah could be Morgan's birthday present to himself. With it being his birthday he would demand an Oscar worthy performance from her as well with her doing all the work. After seeing her in the Princess Leia outfit and how much of a star wars fan he is, he would probably want that. What reasons was you thinking for them going away together? Think it would be too obvious both of them always disappearing at the same time.
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From ANON - It was merlin on October 18, 2015
I think you've basically written a chapter for me Mufc87 haha . While not the next one , I was going to have a chapter where it's Morgan's birthday . I was thinking about him blackmailing her to go away with him for a few days but the excuses i think off aren't that plausable . Your idea would be a perfect demand for that . Although what would the fantasy costume be ? Because Sarah would look fantastic in anything haha
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From ANON - Mufc87 on October 18, 2015
Yeah exactly like that. Technically she has no power or control, she's basically having to make his perfect night of sex come true basically. Wears his ultimate fantasy costume whilst begging Morgan to do all the things to her that he loves whilst pretending she actually wants them things to happen. The power trip he would be from that would be huge.
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From ANON - Luke on October 18, 2015
I like that suggestion, probably the most humiliating idea yet.

Imagine if she had to choose the positions and such. She would be there riding Morgan when she suddenly climbs off him on to all fours looks over her shoulder and wiggles her ass at him, and says Morgan baby I need your fat cock in my tight little ass. That would be humiliating for her acting like that's what she wants when she hates it. Cause she would need to make the peformance convincing, and Morgan would feel like a king having that much control over Sarah, where she's begging to be ass fucked like she wants it.
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From ANON - Mufc87 on October 18, 2015
Forgot to add in my last review about Sarah being in control. She'd have to beg Morgan to fuck her throat, stick it in her ass, cum on her face for eg. All the things that Morgan loves and she doesn't like doing, she'd have to beg him to do it to her without even asking her for it. That's probably the most degrading thing I can think of, making her beg for things she doesn't like. And for Morgan that would probably be the hottest thing that could happen, the blonde goddess begging him for the things he loves the most.
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From ANON - Mufc87 on October 18, 2015
Honestly the best way to degrade and humiliate Sarah would be by giving her the control for one of their fuck sessions. As it stands Morgan tells her what to do and how they are going to fuck. But what if he gave her the power once. She had to choose the positions, would she choose anal? She'd have to beg him for him to cum on her face for eg without Morgan telling her that's what he wants. Morgan tells her before they begin that he expects 100% effort from her and everything she does has to have Morgan's pleasure in mind. Basically she has to put on her best performance for him.

Would she choose the things she secretly enjoys? Or would she choose the things that Morgan normally demands? And she would have to either fully pretend that she enjoys it or she truly does enjoy it. Either way would be completely humiliating for her.
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From ANON - Derek on October 18, 2015
I understand what your saying but your notes at the end of the last chapter worried me. You said that you couldn't have Sarah bouncing on his cock like a dog in heat after only their second time. That to me says she will be doing that in future chapters, and if she does that, that goes a little further then unwanted enjoyment. That's Sarah truly enjoying it and needing the hard fucking, unless Morgan's forcing her to ride him hard.

Maybe you just need to show Sarah hating Morgan a little more, as well as her enjoying the sex, to show that she truly despises the man. Still good story so far though.
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From ANON - It was merlin on October 16, 2015
I'll answer what my goal is to some of your questions. I've made it clear in a few replies before that at no point will Sarah be going for Morgan or have any other feelings beside hate towards him . Will she get pleasure from him or enjoy it in a twisted way yes but it will always be an unwanted enjoyment. At no point will she fall for Morgan,Chuck will always be number one like some have said if she just starts going to Morgan and dropping her panties begging for it the whole story looses the vibe I've been trying to go for . Maybe I'm not showing that we'll enough . As for Morgan , it's simple, Sarah's like the impossible beauty no one like him could imagine getting so he takes his chance with the blackmail. But I'm trying to make it seem like he's drunk with power, after all someone like him having control over the top CIA agent who's drop dead gorgeous to top it off his ego will go through the roof much like when he had the intersect.And yeah he likes giving her pleasure for two reason , one it excerts his power over her humiliating her, making her body react more to him etc and two he enjoys pleasing her because who wouldn't want to make Sarah Walker moan . I actually called the last chapter the man with two personalities because when he's not alone with Sarah's he's his normal overly freindly self , but when he wants her and steps into a room his over side takes over his newly found darker side . Hope that answers some questions as to what I'm actually looking to get across in the story. So If I'm not filling what you want there's plenty of other great fics on here .
Lastly though I just want to make a hot fic , sometimes it might not be believable, my main concern is people enjoying it .

Merlin
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From ANON - Derek on October 16, 2015
Honestly I hope that doesn't happen. The last thing I want is Sarah craving more time with Morgan. I just don't see how this story ends otherwise and what Morgan's future plan is.
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From mty14 on October 16, 2015
The moment Sarah becomes Morgan's sex slave is the moment this story probably jumps the shark and either flat out ends or ceases being interesting to read. The only interesting part of the story (aside from the sex) is Sarah's internal struggle against Morgan and what he's doing to her. Once that's gone there's very little left. There's a reason people have been railing against that eventuality in these 100+ reviews.
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From ANON - Derek on October 16, 2015
At the minute she hates it, but I guarantee within a few chapters she will be loving it. I bet in a future chapter she will be making love with chuck but she won't be able to orgasm without thinking of Morgan. What's Morgan's endgame? Make Sarah enjoy the sex and become. Addicted to it as he lives out his ultimate fantasies? Then what? Let's chuck and his cheating girlfriend live happily ever after? I think hes training her to be his submissive and crave the sex so she will do anything he wants and she forgets all about chuck. That's just my opinion though, maybe I'm wrong but I doubt it.
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From ANON - MV007 on October 16, 2015
I agree with that mty14. I may have been attributing thoughts that weren't there for posters. See, my initial post was in response to whether Morgan would want to see Sarah fuck other guys. I thought the original post asking why would he want to see that was saying that Morgan has real emotional feelings for Sarah and wants her to enjoy these acts because he has some need to please her. I don't see things that way. I see it as he wants Sarah to enjoy it because it's all the more humiliating.

Bottom line for me is that I just want to read more and more chapters of Sarah being humiliated. There are still so many things to be done. From a facial to anal to bringing in third parties.
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From mty14 on October 16, 2015
He wants Sarah to enjoy it because that's just another form of humiliating her. Making her admit to herself how much she's enjoy sex with a man that isn't the one she loves. That's really it. She DOES hate the sex, just on a more emotional level instead of a physical one. Don't know why that's so hard to understand.
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From ANON - Guest on October 16, 2015
Debate is all fine and dandy, but I wanna know the ETA of the next chapter. Sorry for being so impatient Merlin, but I am excited for the next chapter.
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