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By : ItwasMerlin

From ANON - Derek on October 16, 2015
I'm not so sure. I think in a few chapters time Sarah will really enjoy them things. I think he's easing her into slowly but eventually I think she'll start to crave them things from Morgan. Hopefully I'm wrong and she never craves it and continues to hate Morgan, but judging by how the first few chapters have gone that's how I see Sarah going.

And I think Morgan does want Sarah to truly enjoy herself, maybe I'm wrong but he seems to go out of his way to get her to enjoy it. Maybe that's just to prove to himself that he can get a reaction out of her, I don't know. We should find out after a few more chapters.
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From ANON - MV007 on October 16, 2015
I don't think he's trying to make sure she enjoys it. I think he gets off on the fact that she is slightly enjoying it. And he has degraded her by forcing her to commit sexual acts against her will. He's face fucked her. He's forced her to beg for him. All of this while knowing she didn't want to. I think continuing to force Sarah to do things hat she doesn't want to do would be in character for this story. It's a power game for Morgan. And having Sarah fuck other guys is just another power move.
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From ANON - It was merlin on October 16, 2015
I do enjoy the debate this story had caused especially when I wasn't even going to go any further after the first chapter. Having only written it mostly as a way to practice my writing.
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From ANON - Luke on October 16, 2015
Derek does have a point. What has Morgan done that has degraded Sarah?

Everything he's done, he's done with her pleasure in mind and making sure she enjoys it. As a previous reviewer said things like a facial would be degrading, but he hasn't done anything like that. Yeah he does see her as an object he can use for his own pleasure, but even when he's fucking her he's trying to make sure she enjoys it. If he was trying to degrade her he would make sure she hated the sex, not enjoy it has he has been doing.
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From ANON - Derek on October 16, 2015
Not sure I agree with you there MV007. Morgan's treating Sarah like a slut because he knows she enjoys it. Morgan wants Sarah to enjoy the sex with him, that why he's doing the things he's doing. If Morgan truly wanted to degrade Sarah, he would do things to her that she hated and things she didn't enjoy. If Morgan truly doesn't have any feelings for Sarah and wants to degrade her, whys he making sure she enjoys the sex and why is he doing things he knows she'll enjoy? He wouldn't care about her pleasure and her enjoying it if he wanted to degrade her, in fact he would do the opposite of what he's been doing.
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From MV007 on October 15, 2015
Morgan would want to see Sarah fuck other men because he likes degrading her. He doesn't have any real feelings for her. In this story he sees her as an object for him to use. While I agree that Jeff and Lester wouldn't be able to keep quiet, I'm still not sure that matters. I'll believe whatever you want me to if it involves Sarah getting used like this. It's really hot. You could always work in other guys to, whether it's Bryce or an original character or someone else we've seen.
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From ANON - Derek on October 15, 2015
Obviously we all come here to read about hot sex as that's the point of this site. So hopefully you don't use the Jeff and lester storyline, I mean I really couldn't imagine any sex scene that involves them 2 as being hot. Quite frankly it would be disgusting. And the fact they wouldn't keep quiet about it would involve major storyline problems, for eg they would want to fuck Sarah whenever they wanted in exchange for their silence. Surely Morgan wouldn't risk his arrangement with Sarah, as it stands he can fuck her when he wants, but if people find out about them having sex, their arrangement is over.

As I say I can see Morgan wanting Sarah to have sex with other women, but I can't see that he wants to watch her have sex with other men.
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From ANON - It was merlin on October 15, 2015
These have been great ideas and while I won't promise I'll use them they do help inspire me to write . I keep getting the Jeff and Lester suggestion and while I think he was hot it's a very tricky storyline to put in without it seeming bad just because they couldn't keep it secret .
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From ANON - Anon on October 15, 2015
Is realism really our chief concern here?

Looking forward to Sarah learning to love the anal.
Is Morgan going to tell her to practice with Chuck (so Chuck doesn't notice the change) or spring it on her (Ouch!)

Thumbs up on the facial idea.

I'm sure you can work around the threesome angles.
It won't be "in character" but if it was would any of this be happening?
I mean, I like the idea of Sarah loving Chuck but loving getting fucked and demeaned by Morgan. (shrug)
Run with it, dude!
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From ANON - Luke on October 15, 2015
Not sure if having Ellie involved works in this story. If Ellie finds out about Sarah cheating on Chuck she would never trust her again. Personally I think Ellie would do everything in her power to split Sarah and chuck up, I'm also not sure if Ellie could live with the guilt of cheating on Devon, and knowing her brothers girlfriend was cheating on him. I just don think thy could live in each other's lives for the rest of their lives with knowing what they've done.

Now carina would work, she would do anything to help Sarah out with her situation I think. You just have to be careful with how many other people you bring into this story, because you could end up writing yourself into a corner, for eg a lot of people requesting Jeff and lester how would that work? Them two morons would never keep quiet if they fucked Sarah walker they would tell everyone.

And surely Morgan wouldn't want other men fucking Sarah? Women yeah that's sexy as hell, but why would Morgan want to watch Sarah with other men? Just wouldn't make sense. Hope everything works out for chuck in the end, think he deserves to be happy after all of this. And hopefully Sarah comes up with a plan or something to get out of this arrangement, she ain't tried to find a way out yet.
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From ANON - Derek on October 15, 2015
Not bad so far. Must agree with the last reviewer on his suggestions.

Not sure I buy the Ellie threesome idea either as she would surely tell chuck and wouldn't risk her marriage, unless she's being blackmailed to somehow. Maybe her and Sarah have a girls night and Sarah slips Ellie some drugs or seduces her or something and Morgan films it. Not sure if Sarah would go through with that as Ellie would hate Sarah in the future for that, so Sarah may keep chuck but Ellie would never approve of Sarah after that.

The facial idea I agree with, that would be the most demeaning thing he could do to her, but knowing the Sarah in this story she would probably love that anyway.

And as ideasss said the most important thing is for Sarah to keep hating Morgan, if she starts to like him after everything he's put her through, it just wouldn't make sense and would probably ruin your story.
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From ANON - Ideassss on October 15, 2015
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A morning where Chuck is getting ready for work and Morgan texts Sarah to come to his room quickly and he tells her to get on her knees and he cums in her mouth...they hear Chuck calling out to Sarah and Sarah kisses Chuck goodbye whilst just swallowing Morgan cum

Morgan sets up a gloryhole type of thing and makes Sarah make all these guys get off, at the end you could make him say something like 'so how did you like sucking off Jeff and Lester? or something, her being furious etc

I don't really like the Ellie threesome idea, because I think Ellie would tell Chuck straight away. I wouldn't really buy that situation. It could work with Carina I guess?

Maybe Morgan could get Sarah to convince Chuck that she wants a threesome. You could show her trying to suggest morgan as the third person to Chuck without giving anything away. You could then have Morgan be really aggressive to her and Chuck starts to sense something weird is going on. Morgan really wants to prove to her/himself that she makes the most noise for him. Maybe Sarah saying something like 'not as good as chuck' could spark it.

Facial. I can't believe you haven't had Morgan blast all over her face. It's probably the most demeaning thing he can do to her.

Family dinner. Morgan is sitting near Sarah (Chuck on the other side) and he grabs her hand whilst his penis is out under the table and he forces her to jerk him off. You could also have him fingering her and her trying not to show any reaction

I think the important thing is to keep Sarah hating Morgan, don't make her like him at all
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From ANON - Guest on October 08, 2015
Hey Merlin, awesome story. Any idea when you will be able to update the next chapter?
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From ANON - Guest on September 21, 2015
Whoo! Update! Great as always. Can't wait for the next one. Ellie should def. be included
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From ANON - merlin on September 15, 2015
Well I'm currently working on it diablo but I couldn't give you an exact date . I don't plan on it being as long as the last chapter but you never know so that's why I couldn't say. I do have an idea for a chapter title to give you a clue at what's coming . I think I'm going to call it one asshole meets another . Take from that what you will . Thank you for the continued support
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