Reviews for The Blackmail of Sarah WalkerBy : ItwasMerlin |
updateeeeee please
I absolutely love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. I will say it seems a little cruel to end this here. For both the reader and Morgan. For Morgan not to cum is frustrating. Though I guess he's not completely frustrated since he knows what's coming next. I just can't wait for him to pump her ass full of cum or to paint her face again maybe after a little ass to mouth action. Keep up the great work.
Enjoying this very much. Only wish I could find similar story for Castle or bones heroines (Beckett-Brennan)
Just thought I'd encourage you to keep on going with the story... seems like you are getting a lot of flame for no good reason. Know that there are readers who do enjoy your stories (esp. this one and the castle fic) as they are!
Chapter felt super short, it was very good though, the dynamic was perhaps the best it has been since the first couple of chapters
This is just one of those stories I love to hate. Hate the pairing, but I love the way that you handle it. As far as the haters go, fuck em. It's easy to tell you what to do when they are too scared to do it themselves.
Thanks for the update and I can't wait to see the outcome.
nice update. I love this story. Can't wait for the dark and the dirty arcs
Hey, how are you doing lately? It's finally out! I liked the chapter especially when Sarah unconsciously tried to make Morgan paid attention on her. Out of curious, did you have an ending planned out yet?
this last chapter was good. I know you are critical of yourself but I found the writing enjoyable to read. Obviously this chapter is essentially a teaser for part three given what the name of this segment has been. Anxiously awaiting part 3 and hope it is out soon. Even if you don't think it's perfect. I'm sure it's very good.
Welcome back! I wouldn't worry about what people write in reviews. Write the story the way you want, but remember everyone's a critic on fan fiction sites. Constructive criticism is meant to enhance your writing, but reviewers that get angry and argue with you should be ignore. There will always be people that want the story to go a different way than you do, tough. If they are enjoying your story that they are free to stop. I made this mistake when I first started leaving reviews, I had the best of intentions (trying to increase their views) but all I was doing was frustrating the writer. Now if there is a story that I find objectionable I either stop reading it or read but don't inject my objections on the story. Further, unless the author asks ((as you have) I refrain from unsolicited story ideas. Now that that's out of the way, this story is VERY uncomfortable for me, but that's whats great about it! Your writing actually illicits an emotional response! In my case it's usually anger at the troll. At first I hated this idea that Morgan would do this to Chuck, but then I remembered, this is fiction, lol! Now what's really got me hooked his seeing Morgan brought down! I'm sooo glad you plan on posting three different endings, something for everyone, lol! I would LOVE for Casey to catch him and then blackmail Morgan with the un edited tapes that clearly show Morgan's treachery. Also, since this appears to set in late season three or early season four, it would be awesome for the little blackmailing weasel to lose all of the memories of his times with Sarah when he uploads the faulty intersect (he doesn't deserve to keep those memories). Of course Sarah will also forget after Quinn wipes her memories. The only one in the know would be Casey and isn't much of a talker. Anyway, that's all I have! Keep writing we're still out here waiting tomreadvyour stories.
Oh shit, an update. Thank you. I love this story and can't get enough of it. I hope the wait isn't as long next time. I need as much as I can get. Great job and don't worry about the haters. There are far more fans.
Hey, i liked the part where morgan waits for sarah giving him bj then started eating his sandwich.
it would be nice for morgan to play with sarah a bit while making a sandwich like a touch or two. and kinda hoping to see morgan cum in her mouth and force her to swallow. but i liked the chapter.
it's really nice to see for you post another chapter despite it took a long while. it at least gives you more confidence in writing.
may i ask if u have new chapter for merlin soon?
Can you please update this? or give some hint your atleast working on it even a little. Doesnt matter if it is amazing , apart from a few stories the Chuck section on here is essentially dead .
i saw you updated some of your other stories, i do hope this is on the list. Sarah need's to come to terms with the fact she likes it haha, although as long as she always hates Morgan. Gets off on being his sub, but never wanting to see him if you catch my drift. They would be way to oc i think .
Update yo
update yo, it has been ages
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