Reviews for The Blackmail of Sarah WalkerBy : ItwasMerlin |
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merlin
Did you give up on this story completely?
Loving this. So hope for another chap. in the future.
yes, please continue this story. It doesn't have to be perfect. My only criticism would be that I will never be satisfied until Morgan's cock violates Sarah's ass.
please contiune this story is amazing
Dude...UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
please update this i look forward to this story
curious where you're taking this and when will you make Sarah actually orgasm from Morgan's actions.
You should eventually have Morgan take her to a local glory hole, have her suck random strangers off while Morgan is degrading her and fucking her in the room from behind.
You can insert those knocks on the wall [that signal the stranger is coming] and have Morgan force her to do various things with the load.
It would probably work in your task of making her just agree to anything Morgan says
I wanted to com on here to encourage you to keep writing this story. I absolutely love it. I visited your tumblr page and I understand you are not feeling terribly motivated at the moment. If there is anything we can do to help you please let us know. If you want a little inspiration then maybe you can search for some recent images of Yvonne. In my opinion She recently made one her sexiest red carpet appearances ever. Fantastic story thus far and you can't tease that tight little asshole without a payoff. You just can't!
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Very nicely done.
Nice update. This is just my preference, but my favorite is seeing Sarah realising she has no choice but to submit to him. So I would have had Morgan make Sarah give herself the facial. I'd have him push her to do things like strip, dance for him, make a video following a script, maybe pick up a guy in a bar and fuck him. .
So now we need the next part. Please don't make us wait for 9 months this time.
I often wonder if people walk by stores that someone invested a lot of time and energy into setting up just the way THEY wanted and say to themselves "I'd never fucking shop there. It's completely not my taste or style."
Then I wonder what kind of person it takes to think they are important enough to stick their head in the shop's door and announce exactly that to the people inside for no other reason than to draw attention to themselves.
I wonder a lot of things about people...
I've tried to read this story objectively and I'm not really having any real issues with the plot, what there is of it, but try as I might I'm finding it very difficult to enjoy the sex. I mean that is really why we come here and if its not working then that is a problem. I think its because the idea of anyone having sex with Morgan Grimes is simply not hot on any level. And there is my issue. Him having sex is just too ichy and repulsive for me to even enjoy Sarah being a slut. There is simply nothing exciting or stimulating about it no matter what Sarah does to him. I've never been a fan of the bearded troll and him being the male in this fantasy is just yuck! It's too bad because you are a pretty good writer but this story has the wrong character to turn me on in any way. In fact my reaction is just the opposite.
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