Reviews for The Blackmail of Sarah WalkerBy : ItwasMerlin |
I love people who leave a review saying they are not as interested in the story anymore, yet still were interested enough to leave a review!!! Keep up the good work Merlin! Some of us are very much interested!
Last chapter wasn't as good as I was expecting. Don't think that's due to a drop in your quality of work. But more for the fact that I've lost interest in this story due to how long it's been since it was updated. For a while I was excited and anticipating a new chapter, but after a while I just couldn't be bothered to honest. I find myself reading other stories instead. Yeah some may not be great quality but at least they update frequently.
great chapter love that you kind of incorperated Sarahs season five seduction .....although i bet Morgan wasnt her chosen choice . please update sooner , this is one of my favourite stories but it's so rare we get to see more .
If we saw the stockings and suspensder get up is there any chance of some other Sarah costumes being used ? princess Lea comes to mind or one of her leather catsuits . or weinerlicoius or double oo or ... you get my drift .
or maybe you could bend some scenes in the show to fit in with Morgans blackmail , like off the top of my head the scene he wakes up to find Sarah getting orange juice in a revealing get up .
I love this story so much. I'm not sure I could ask for more.
The person with the curious blue eyes is either carina or casey. Carina is obviously gonna get involved. But if its casey I'd like to see him on chucks side and not sleep with Sarah. Also would like him to lose respect for Sarah as well, and maybe tell her she can't be a spy and a serious girlfriend. And that she made the wrong choice in fucking the mark because there must be hundreds of female agents that could seduce a mark. It would be nice to actually see someone in chucks corner and if it's him I hope he doesn't help her in covering up what she's doing.
it's ok, the sex scenes are starting to sound all the same
i love it. hopefully the next update won't be 10 months later. please do try to update more quickly. plus i do not understand why you keep second guessing yourself and doubting your work so much. this thing's awesome. please please... 2nd part update... asap
That was HOT. Some points it felt slightly jaded but even you admitted that . But for the most part that was the best one so far . I to hate Morgan like another reviewer said but I suppose that's the point . He's like an extreme version of Morgan with the intersect but he has something even better . Sarah's being watched ? I have an inkling who but I love the fact she's so frazzled by everything that's going on she doesn't even notice . Some posters think she might cum during anal due to the hint your giving ..... now that would be hot . And please update soon
It's finally back and what a chapter it is. Great stuff. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Think the thing that Sarah does that surprises them both, is orgasm during anal. That's the only thing I can think of. Hopefully you update quickly and not in 10 months time again, it's just too long between updates.
Merlin here . Really sorry to anyone who was waiting today for an update as it won't be coming . I've been called into work on overtime and won't be home till late (typing this on my phone on my break). But I'm also up early morning so can't stay up to long etc . I need the extra money so couldn't say no to the work but have no fear I'm off tomorrow . Only have to edit it ... although it's a long chapter.
So I hope you can wait just one night more haha sorry people
Merlin
The update coming today?
The anticipation is palpable.
YES!!! I've been checking this almost every day for the last few months, so I'm very keen for the next chapter in a few days :D I'm sure some of the people reading, like me, will like it no matter what Merlin.
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