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Reviews for The Blackmail of Sarah Walker

By : ItwasMerlin
  • From ANON - on July 04, 2016

    hello everyone Merlin here . Actually have good new regarding this story , im hoping wednesday to have the next chapter up and edited . sorry about the wait , its been a literal , motivated not motivated etc with this for various reasons . Its gotten to the point where no matter how much i change re write i dont like it haha so im just going to give you what ive got and hope it is ok . Its over 18000 words so i do hope someone finds it okay . 

    thought you deserved a little update . See you in a few days 

    Merlin


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  • From ANON - Anon on June 17, 2016
    Hellooooooooooo
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  • From ANON - Regarding the preview on June 05, 2016
    Sampled the milk when can I buy the cow
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  • From ANON - AnonX on May 27, 2016
    Thanks for the teaser / sample Merlin!
    Glad you're still working on it and looking forward to reading what you've cooked up.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 26, 2016
    Sarah mindset/attitude is pretty simple, you don't make her look forward to it at all, you make her hate herself after it happens. The torn feelings are there when you have her enjoy it while it is going on, and feel bad with herself once it is over.

    I think if you make her look forward to it and/or miss it....then the whole blackmail angle is gone and it's just straight up cheating.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 25, 2016
    I'm not sure I'm gonna like where your going to go with Sarah's thought process to be honest. Your probably gonna make it so she's missed being fucked by Morgan for a couple of days. I know she hates that she has to do that with Morgan, but she enjoys the submissive part. So in the few days since they last fucked, she's probably made love to chuck numerous times, and she's realised now that she enjoys being used more then her connection of love making with chuck. I don't mind that she secretly enjoys the physical side of things with Morgan, but I am worried that she will enjoy her time with Morgan rather then her time with chuck. That's what every author on here tends to do. Will she openly express her enjoyment more in further chapters? For eg moaning more and begging for more without being told to? Orgasms and such? Hopefully not. I hope she continues as she is, enjoying it but trying to make it look like she doesn't.
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  • From ANON - itwasmerlin on May 25, 2016
    just a small update ....im up to 13'500 know so it's slowly getting there .Im not rewritting parts either so thats a plus , the main thing im struggling with is thought process etc of Sarah especially . After all Morgan's ego is basically based on the way he was when he got the intersect , he is also consumed by lust and having power . This chapter could be split into three at this rate . Here's where im currently up to.

    'As his fingers continued to slip in and out of the stunning blonde, the bearded man could feel his cock throbbing almost painfully, he needed to be inside her. It had been a few days ….too long in his mind to have not savored the feeling of being inside her unbelievably sweet pussy. He wanted her mouth again, he wanted to eat her out again ….. He wanted to sample her unbelievable ass. But he had the whole day for that, but right now his cock was begging to be buried inside the pussy his fingers where currently knuckle deep in.'

    hope to update soon ... Merlin
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 18, 2016
    I know and I hope it publishes it , but there's some stories on here that get a lot of flack as people can't take Sarah and someone else .
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 17, 2016
    He has 10000 words written and this story has its own controversy when it was published
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 17, 2016
    In all honesty it doesn't suprise me the author hasn't updated. Some people on this site can't take anything but Chuck/Sarah and probably wouldn't in a million years be able to take the idea of Sarah getting any pleasure from Morgan .

    I'm not one of them , I love this story and think the thought process and Sarah's denial of any enjoyment is HOT . Plus the ugly/beautiful fucking each other aspect aswell . Please update soon Merlin .
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 16, 2016
    Bring balance to the force you must
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  • From ANON - Shane on May 06, 2016
    ^^What these guys said
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 06, 2016
    Yeah merlin. Fuck the free world
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  • From ANON - JoeBob on May 06, 2016
    "Art is never finished, only abandoned." - Leonardo da Vinci.

    The haters are going to criticize almost no matter what you do. I say break your 10,000 words into 3, 3,000 word chapters and post them once a week.

    Fuck anybody who complains.
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  • From ANON - Diabloeffect1982 on May 06, 2016
    Hi merlin saw what you said about second guessing what you have wrote so far. Personally i think you should just publish what you have written so far just to get it out of the way and that might allow you to write the following chapters better.im sure that what you have written will be just as good as what came before. Myself I'm just wanting to see Morgan fuck sarah up the ass and having her turn out to like it.
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