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Reviews for The Blackmail of Sarah Walker

By : ItwasMerlin
  • From ANON - diabloeffect1982 on February 10, 2016
    One way to bring in Carina is not have Sarah ask her.But have her help Morgan willingly it could be she always wanted to fuck sarah but never could but now use's the blackmail to her advantage.u could also bring in zondra the same way she wants Sarah's ass for not believing her when that cats broke up and have Morgan record it all.they can then use it to make Sarah their willing slut when ever they are in town and Morgan's when there not.Morgan could pimp her out but not to the buy more guys doubt they would keep quiet.or have her put on a mask and put her on a camsite and she has to do what ever she's told.if writer's block is a problem why not write a oneshot for chuck or a different show to get back in the mood to write again
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  • From MV007 on February 08, 2016
    My imagination is not as good as yours so I can't give you any great scenarios. I would just say that the blackmail angle is what is making this really hot for me. I also think you have tons of options to explore. Morgan taking Sarah's ass would be unbelievably hot in this story. He still needs to give her a nice facial. Then you also have the option to bring in other characters. Maybe Morgan wants Sarah to seduce captain awesome and secretly videotape it. Maybe Bryce comes back to town and Morgan forces Sarah to succumb to his advances all the while videotaping it. Maybe he forces Sarah to fuck chuck under the instruction that she can't come and if she does he will have a punishment for her. Or maybe there is some scenario you can think of that gets carina involved. Or maybe there is a mission where Morgan forces Sarah to all the way with the bad guy.
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  • From ANON - stuart on February 06, 2016
    for suggestions it depends. what do you mean by slutty submissive sarah? how is she going to be slutty? is she going to carry on pretending or will she come to like her arrangement with morgan? is she being submissive cause she wants to be or because of morgans threats? is she going to openly express that she enjoys her time with morgan or is she going to continue secretly enjoying it?
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  • From ANON - itwasmerlin on February 06, 2016
    I haven't given it up and i know exactly how the next few chapters would go but writing it is a different story . I find with writing smut i go through stages with how much i can write , im currently sitting on a few near finished chapters of my stories etc but when i go to write at the moment nothing is happening . Writers block is a bitch ..... just so you know i wont abandon this , because i love writing a slutty submissive Sarah. I am alwways open to suggestions aswell , maybe that will kick start my brain.
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  • From ANON - Guest on February 06, 2016
    Looks like the author decided to abandon this story. Too bad I liked the story.
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  • From ANON - Reyes on February 04, 2016
    Hope u will still continue this story. Love it so far and wanna know what happens next.
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  • From ANON - JimmyJ on January 25, 2016
    Is this story continuing or did the author stop writing? Hope theres more.
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  • From ANON - diabloeffect1982 on December 28, 2015
    Merlin any idea when the next chapter will be up
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2015
    Don't give up Merlin. Can't wait for you to post another
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  • From will30 on December 12, 2015
    Really loved this. Hope there's more coming. Thanks for posting..
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  • From ANON - It was merlin on November 26, 2015
    I'm working on it , had writers block after my computer fucked up . Motivation went as I had to rewrite. But my fingers are finally moving again . To anyone reading this , would love your thoughts .if Morgan started to force Sarah to always call him by another name when there alone as another humiliation /power trip what would it be ? Not sure sir or anything to generic would work especially as Morgan's an odd fellow ?
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  • From MV007 on November 25, 2015
    Suffice to say, I'm desperate for an update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 03, 2015
    The worst? Ha! Get some perspective.

    Like me, Hitler and Satan are sitting around conspiring to ruin your day.

    There's a way to offer an opinion without being rude is all I'm saying.

    Yet there's always some jackhole who wants to back seat drive and second guess.

    Two if you're lucky.

    Others can say what they like but I can't? 'Cuz you say so. Pfft.

    Pull up a chair and join us at the table. Deal him in, Adolf!

    KMA
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on November 02, 2015
    eh, there's been multiple people that have presented valid reasons why that scene should be skipped. my reaction is that I don't care that much but if you asked me, I don't really want to see it either.

    it's always up to the author to decide, but idiots that try to shame people for sharing their opinions (in the fucking review section) are the worst
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 02, 2015
    So there's one vote for not reading a scene

    Make sure you revolve everything around that, ok?
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