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Reviews for The Blackmail of Sarah Walker

By : ItwasMerlin
  • From mty14 on October 19, 2015
    I love the story; I've been following it since day 1. I just hate bad ideas.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 19, 2015
    Mty14, you may want to consider abandoning porn as a source of entertainment.

    Or at least letting the rest of us to enjoy these "ridiculous" scenarios.

    I'm in the "more extreme is better" camp so you're being a complete buzzkill.

    Go for it Merlin!
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  • From ANON - Toni on October 19, 2015
    Great story so far can't wait to read more. My only problem would be you don't show enough how much Sarah hates the sex and how really humiliating it is for her. Her being used and fucked by Morgan is supposed to be a punishment for her cheating on chuck. As it is at the minute it's more of a reward then a punishment, how Morgan is treating her at the minute is like her biggest secret fantasy, being treated like a slut. She enjoys it cause it's her biggest secret desire, but it's almost like she's being rewarded for cheating on chuck.
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  • From MV007 on October 18, 2015
    I would just encourage the author to do whatever he or she wants to do. The story this far has been fantastic and one of my favorites in the fandom. Please keep doing what you're doing and I'm sure it will work for the vast majority of your audience.
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  • From ANON - Mufc87 on October 18, 2015
    The author asked for ideas, so I gave him one. Honestly I'm not a big fan of this story anyway. Yeah the sex is hot but I don't like all the cheating aspect of it. I'll carry on reading it though, cause I can't wait till chuck finds out and kicks them all out of his life and goes and finds a better best friend and girlfriend.
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  • From mty14 on October 18, 2015
    It's ridiculous. It's not even believable within the confines of this absurd story, which was obviously what I meant. This Sarah's feelings are too strong, which means she's not a good enough actor to hide her hatred (she hasn't been so far). Morgan would see though it instantly and get upset that she wasn't "performing" well enough and threaten her some more. It wouldn't work though, because even with all the motivation in the world, she would still be terrible at it. Repeat until he gets frustrated enough to punish her some other way. Scene over.


    And even if you disagree, as I've said before, it would still be mind-numbingly similar to the first time they had sex anyway. No reason to repeat stuff we've already seen.
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  • From ANON - Mufc87 on October 18, 2015
    I don't agree. The Sarah in this story would do anything so chuck doesn't find out. Is it believable that Sarah's being blackmailed by a moron? No is it believable that she would cheat on chuck and let Morgan fuck her all the time? No. But people seem to be enjoying it. I don't think it's that much of a stretch to put her in that situation and she would perform. She knows the consequences otherwise, especially if Morgan's forcing her to do it.
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  • From mty14 on October 18, 2015
    You just can't put a character like Sarah in control of a situation, tell her to willingly act the opposite of something that goes to the core of her, and have it all work out 100% fine. It's just lame.
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  • From mty14 on October 18, 2015
    Once again, besides being the same as something that's already happened, that would NEVER work. It's like those stories where victims are told to fuck their rapists "enthusiastically" or face harm/some other threat. It's never believable and always corny. Sarah has shown enough defiance in this story that something like that ever happening would be ridiculous, not only to the reader but to Morgan as well. She'd never be able to give the "100% effort" and be convincing because it's not a plausible idea.
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  • From ANON - Mufc87 on October 18, 2015
    He tells her beforehand that he wants her best effort, if not she knows the consequences. The Sarah in this story would go all out I think, so chuck doesn't find out what she's done.
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  • From mty14 on October 18, 2015
    I fail to see how that idea is any different from making Sarah seduce him. It's literally the same thing with her pretending to enjoy it and having to beg for it and all that. If he "demanded" she pick the positions, logically she would either half-ass it, keep it boring and simple, or do just enough to get by without breaking his rules. She would never chose anal (or most degrading things) unless he explicitly told her to, which defeats the entire purpose of the idea.

    Not that interesting at all. Please don't waste a chapter on it, they take long enough as it is lol.
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  • From ANON - Mufc87 on October 18, 2015
    Not a bad idea, would be humiliating for her as well. If you can get around the both of them disappearing at the same time that idea could work. Maybe Jill sees them there if it's late enough in the story, and she tells chuck but he doesn't believe her cause she hates Sarah. But it puts doubt in chucks mind. Depends on how you want chuck finding out and how your endings gonna go.
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  • From ANON - It was merlin on October 18, 2015
    The reason I would of rather they go away from Burbank , maybe somewhere hot so Morgan could show Sarah off . I was thinking Morgan to excert more of a power play demands Sarah act the loving 'girlfriend' on a 'couples break ' . Meaning she has to keep an act up the whole time including pleasing him anywhere anytime and anyway he wants . Just ideas obviously,
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  • From ANON - Mufc87 on October 18, 2015
    Actually I've had an idea. Maybe chuck is needed on a mission that involves computers or he's just needed to flash. So Morgan tells Sarah to pretend she's ill or just tired from being overworked, so chuck has to take casey with him instead. That way you don't have to involve carina or anybody else and Morgan and Sarah get a couple days alone together.
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  • From ANON - Mufc87 on October 18, 2015
    If you do go down the going away route I'd think that would be a few more chapters down the line. At the minute he's happy just fucking Sarah but eventually he probably would get more demanding where he takes her away and makes her his slave for a few days.

    Honestly I can't think of any good excuses they could use so they can both go away for a few days. Sarah could say she's going away with carina for a few days but where would Morgan say he's going on his own? Or if Morgan said he was going away with carina, what excuse would Sarah use? Certainly tricky that one cause they both don't wanna get caught.
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