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By : MoreCharahPlease
  • From Mufc87 on December 31, 2015
    Just an idea for future chapters. Maybe you could incorporate the idea from your other story, where chuck and Sarah videotape themselves having sex. I could really see this version of Sarah really getting off on that, especially with her being able to watch chuck fucking her.
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  • From Mufc87 on December 31, 2015
    Not my favourite chapter that you've wrote, but I am still looking forward to more. Definitely hope to see some more anal in future chapters though.
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  • From sleepygirl78 on December 31, 2015
    Not my favorite chapter so far, because I didn't like much the part with the neighbor, but I still like the story. Just seeing there's an update always makes my day! It could have been fun to have an holiday related chapter, because I'd like to see how they would deal with christmas without making their relationship official.
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  • From ANON - AT90 on December 30, 2015
    I liked it, I was hoping it was Carina at the door looking for front row seats haha. Interested to see where you are taking us plot wise
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  • From ANON - fan on December 30, 2015
    Unbelievably hot. I love how they began to try to out-loud-sex Sarah's neighbor, but instead of yelling and being boisterous for the sake of outdoing the neighbor, they just got super into it. And they were loud because they were actually enjoying the sex. And Sarah coming by riding Chuck's ass and then his thigh? Hottest thing I've ever read. Can't wait to see what the plot has in store, but man I hope there is some anal coming soon. You're just so good at making anal really really sexy.
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  • From sleepygirl78 on December 16, 2015
    Perfect mix between hotness and plot, I loved it. I really appreciate that you take the time to update this story regularly. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 16, 2015
    Thank you for another awesome chapter! I absolutely love their sexual chemistry. I can't wait until the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - mcp fan on December 16, 2015
    Too damn hot. On fire.

    I cannot WAIT for the next one. And please do keep the super hot sex coming. I like the plot, too, but man the sex is so great in this story.

    So impressed.
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  • From Mufc87 on December 15, 2015
    Another superb chapter. Think the plot went at the right speed in this chapter. Rather then Sarah have a complete reversal on her relationship stance which would of been way of base on how she's been so far, but she was at least entertaining the fact that chuck could be her boyfriend one day and that he would be good for her. I hope you get the next update out quick because I think it's gonna be wild with Sarah agreeing to everything chuck asks. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - anon on December 15, 2015
    I still like this story, even though their relationship has progressed too slow for my tastes.

    There was one weird moment in this chapter, where you switched to third person narration for a while. I guess it would have been more challenging to write what you did in first person, but certainly not impossible. It's not really a big deal, and I prefer third person in general, but the way you took felt a bit out of place.
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  • From ANON - fan on December 15, 2015
    Woooooooooooooooooooooooooow. I love the mixture of absolute heat and heartwarmingness. Like, they aren't just connecting on a physical level in this chapter, but also an emotional one. Just perfect. Thank you very much MCP!
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  • From ANON - Ehoh on December 15, 2015
    nooooo he should have come on her face in the shower haha

    I liked the plot development, nice to see that Sarah realizes Chuck wouldn't be like that
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2015
    ...from previous review...

    Forgot to mention, that shower must be huge! ;)
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2015
    I really love this story. And the progression is perfect. Stick to your plan!

    I love that she's starting to entertain the idea that he's not her boyfriend YET. I'm not AS worried about her pushing him away for some reason. I was also glad to see that you didn't go the route of having Bryce and Jack be the same person (it seems). I was wary of a "what are the odds?" moment.

    Technically, there was a part toward the end (starting with "I felt really bad for him...") where later in that paragraph you switched to third person then stayed there for a couple of paragraphs before returning to first person. But overall I really enjoy how well written this is and how well it flows. Thanks!
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  • From Agravain on December 14, 2015
    This continues to be excellent! Looking forward to every chapter.
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