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Reviews for Just A Game

By : MoreCharahPlease
  • From ANON - Heemeyer on December 11, 2015
    Did I mention how hot the anal stuff was in Chapter 13? Cause it was great.
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  • From sleepygirl78 on December 01, 2015
    Another great chapter! I'm still enjoying every single update of this story. Thanks again for keeping up the good work.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on November 30, 2015
    I didn't come on here and review to get yelled at by other reviewers. No disrespect to other people on here who like the story. It's just way too vanilla to be taken seriously. You're on a site for erotica which means BDSM, spanking, and YEAH choking! Stories without that belong on a vanilla site.

    I'm bored with this conversation.

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  • From ANON - anon on November 30, 2015
    More. Please. Just wow.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 30, 2015
    Thank you! I am one of the people who is loving the sex marathon! Applaud you! I ho0e i don't have to wait long for the next chapter!
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  • From KnightRider on November 30, 2015
    Boy Anonymous reviewer you said it, nothing says great sex like choking out your partner. Fucking moron.

    Ignore the idiots MCP your story is awesome. Can't wait to read your next installment and hope the keep trying new things. I'd like to see Chuck try to get her to squirt again. I've always found that hot. Also maybe have them hit up a sex club for public sex in a future chapter. I don't know just throwing out some ideas. Until next time!
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  • From ANON - just have to say on November 29, 2015
    Oh I wasn't going to review at first but then I was skimming the other reviews and decided to respond. Basically, what ERC said. But I also want to add that I have been reading this story since the beginning and honestly sometimes all of the toys and gags take away from the heart of the story. (It's all a matter of opinion.) So a lot of us like what More Charah Please writes because it's hot and sexy and sometimes deliciously dirty, but it is also infused with warmth and heart. Yeah, Chuck and Sarah are "fuck buddies" but they're both new to exploring during sex. Sarah has mentioned a few times how Bryce just did missionary for the most part. And we don't really know about Chuck, but if MCP is keeping close to canon, then he isn't the most experienced guy. Obviously he has had sex, but this isn't something where they're gonna dive into the whole toys and sex room crap. Think about who they are and think about how they are. It doesn't make sense.

    The sex in this story is really, really good. Phenomenally good. And I think the progression of their exploration makes sense. It's less realistic to just throw them in a sex room with ball and chain and gag or whatever. Clamps. I don't friggin know.

    It isn't fair to tear down a story because it doesn't have the intensity of other erotica stories. MCP has been up front about what they're including in the story, and with their own attempts to explore with writing. Please don't discourage a writer the way you are doing. Look at the ratings and other reviews. You're virtually alone. Hope MCP doesn't take those words to heart. You're awesome MoreCharahPlease! Keep doing what you're doing!
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  • From ERC on November 29, 2015
    Don't know what you read but did you read the use of handcuffs and blindfolds and I guess you missed the anal and doggie style but hey you are entitle to your opinion
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  • From ANON - anonmous on November 29, 2015
    not a very realistic portrayal of sex. but apparently other people like it, so i guess you'll write what you're going to write as long as other people come here to praise you.

    find the other stories written by other authors way hotter. why are there no toys? no choking or gags. chuck and sarah should be well passed all that by this point, and there still in missionary.

    just saying it is kind of boring, probably wont be reading further. but thank you for writing fic.
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  • From ANON - mcp fan on November 29, 2015
    Thanks for the quick response, ERC! Bummer, but understandable. This is a story I have no problem checking on every other day or so to see if it's updated. WORTH IT.
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  • From Mufc87 on November 29, 2015
    God damn that chapter was hot. And people think charah sex stories are boring, well this story just proves them wrong. All I can say is more chapters like that please, by far the best chapter you have wrote incredible between the anal and Sarah squirting god damn.
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  • From ERC on November 29, 2015
    No I have asked that question there is no way at this time to get alerts you just have to keep checking the site for updates
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  • From ANON - mcp fan on November 29, 2015
    Can anyone tell me how to keep track of stories? Is there a way to get alerts on this site? Thanks ahead of time if anyone responds. :)

    Onto my review.

    I am consistently turned on by every chapter I read, which I'm assuming is the reason why you write this story in the first place. You are very successful. It's just so hot and sexy. And yet there's still so much emotion in it. It isn't just empty sex. And I think even Sarah realizes that-while she's so into this fuck buddy but no boyfriend thing, she also knows she cares about Chuck and seems to be willing to admit it. So it isn't just empty sex. They're friends if nothing else. But we as readers know there's a lot more to it, even if she doesn't yet. See? There's so much in this besides just really really really hot sex scenes. And I was never really into reading about anal until I read your Charah's anal sex. It's really hot and dirty, but also heartwarming??? I don't know! This is just so good! It gives me so many feelings but then I'm also all keyed up and want to call my boyfriend to get him over here! Sorry tmi!

    Thanks for this chapter!
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  • From ANON - AdmiralK on November 29, 2015
    WOW!!!! That was amazingly hot, sexy, dirty! I love your writing of this story, the hints that Sarah wants more then just fuck buddies. You doing such a great job showing two consenting adults having a (perhaps more than) sexual relationship. Each chapter is hotter then the last. Thank you for this wonderful amazing story. Can't wait for more of the sex marathon and for the plot as well. Your doing a fantastic job with both.
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  • From ERC on November 29, 2015
    You know there are some authors on this site say that Chara sex pairings are boring but you and VSC prove them wrong of course your story is AU with no Sara and Chuck not being spies other then that I think the characters are close to what they were in the show great chapter 13 can't wait for the next
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