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By : MoreCharahPlease
  • From KnightRider on November 02, 2015
    Guh sex marathon with Sarah. Chuck Bartowski you lucky bastard. Can't wait.
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  • From ANON - lauren reads on November 02, 2015
    I've definitely woken up like that before. And unfortunately I wasn't quite as glad about what I'd done the night before. That's another story.

    I continue to be impressed by the fact that each sex scene remains fresh and just as exciting as the last. I'm all for bringing things back around. Honestly, I'm in a sexual relationship, and I enjoy myself just as much in the original missionary position as when we're doing something acrobatic. Depends on my mood, of course, but that's how it is. Right?

    So I'll be glad for any sex scene, no matter what Chuck and Sarah are doing to each other. Your writing makes each touch really exciting for the readers. Like..really exciting.Haha!

    Thanks! Can't wait for more. :)

    P.S. I know some say it is a little boring seeing all the sex stuff, but they ARE on a site for adult fan fiction, and a lot of this is going to be porn. At least you have a path you're moving along. Which I appreciate. But I also REALLY REALLY REALLY love reading the sex. Damn it's so hot. Keep doing what you're doing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 02, 2015
    Good idea! Sex marathon!!!!! I look forward to it. I liked how the next day was not awkward for them and that he didn't hesitate to pleasure her! Bravo! Thank you
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  • From ANON - CT on November 02, 2015
    nice chapter
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  • From ANON - Luke on October 26, 2015
    Really wish you would update this story quicker, the wait in between chapters is unbearable, that's how good this story is.
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  • From ANON - Derek on October 22, 2015
    Awesome story. Update soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 21, 2015
    Updateeeee!!! It's my favorite! !!!
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  • From ANON - wowed on October 18, 2015
    this is suuuuuuper hot. sometimes i feel a little disgusted or uncomfortable by the stuff i see on this site. but this is just really great smut. and the story is great too.
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  • From ANON - excusemyfrench on October 14, 2015
    Wow! Really great chapter! I think smut-wise it's the best you've written yet in this story.
    It's really perfect how the sex keeps getting hotter as they get closer. Same as everyone, I can't wait for the morning after, I hope Sarah won't take too many steps back now that they're really moving forward.
    I think your Chuck and Sarah are exactly in character. Chuck is leading Sarah to a deeper relationship just by being his adorable self, and she is stubbornly ignoring her obvious feelings for him.

    Thank you for updating this story, and also for taking the reviews into account. You're not only very talented but you're trying your best for us to enjoy your story and that's really appreciated.
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  • From ANON - charah lover on October 14, 2015
    I agree with what a couple other reviewers have been saying. You're kinda getting pushed by reviewers to do a threesome with Carina, Sarah, and Chuck. And while this story IS about sex, mostly, and I know you're writing it to test out your smut-writing capabilities, you are really really really good at keeping Chuck and Sarah in character. In spite of their sexual exploration. Let's be honest....you know canon Chuck and Sarah had really hot sex. Look at the beginning of vs Honeymooners. How many meals did the French guy bring them? Like 5 or 6? They probably ate it off of one another's bodies. In between really great sex.

    So I like that you keep them in character even though this is an AU and they're exploring with positions and stuff. But I think a threesome would be out of character. Seriously. For both of them. And even though Carina teases Sarah and wants to know all about her sex life, she seems caring and knows Sarah pretty well. I think she can tell Sarah has deeper feelings for Chuck. And I don't think she'd be willing to ruin things for Sarah by suggesting it. My two cents.

    Anyway, this is so great. I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - fannnonnn on October 14, 2015
    Thank you for the anal! ...never said that before in my life. HA!

    This was absolutely great. And speaking as someone who didn't request it, but sorta hoped you'd write it, I really enjoyed Sarah taking it upon herself to initiate anal sex. And I think that she probably did need liquid courage before she would do it. I just hope it isn't something that she decides she regrets the morning after. That would sort of take the fun out of what was really a hot sex scene. Kudos. This is just great smut.
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  • From ANON - fan for you on October 14, 2015
    I would read your sex scenes over every single erotica novel I've ever read. Have you ever thought about writing erotica? You would sell faster than E.L. James. And your sex isn't abusive or rape. It's two adults consenting to have really fantastic sex. I really hope we see the end of this and that you keep writing. And I hope someday you actually make money from your writing. Because you deserve to.

    Cannot WAIT to read more!
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  • From ANON - nonny on October 12, 2015
    Uh, as hot as 3somes can be, I have to say it'd be very out-of-character for both Chuck and Sarah, in my view.

    Like others have mentioned, Sarah staying the night at Chuck's place is a new development for the two, and it's one that I welcome. It's about time. I'm hoping it leads to more.
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  • From ANON - Heemeyer on October 12, 2015
    Also, I've seen people pushing for a threesome with Carina but I think it'd be a leap for Sarah to suddenly hanker for some poontang.

    Personally, I think it'd be more interesting if Carina approached Sarah and said that since she listened to the sex, she'd like to sample some of that herself and so Sarah hooks her up with Chuck and watches them. Or if she joins in, it's strictly the ladies fucking Chuck, not each other.

    I like the girl-girl action but I don't think it works here.
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  • From ANON - Heemeyer on October 12, 2015
    Chuck, my man. Backdoor lover. Now to see Sarah freak when she wakes up with Chuck. "Oh noes but we caszh!"
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