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By : MoreCharahPlease
  • From ANON - jtc on October 12, 2015
    It's nice to see Sarah actually staying the night. I hope she's starting to look at their relationship differently now..
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  • From ANON - a charah fan on October 12, 2015
    you reeeally give readers what we all want and i love that about this story. can we get handcuffs soon? or some roleplay? i liked what one reviewer said about sex in the buy more when it's all closed up. and if you do decide to do more with the non-sexual stuff, i'm all for it. if not, and it sticks to sex, i'm all for that too. this is some reeeally fantastic smut.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 12, 2015
    This is great, like the way Sarah and Chuck's relationship is developing. Hope you don't have them hook up with other people before realizing what they truly want, though. Had enough of that BS during the show itself. (Threesome with Carina is ok though, because smut)
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 12, 2015
    Another awesome chapter. Thank you! So you mentioned the handcuffs. I really hope they get used in a future chapter!
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  • From ANON - Wolfe on October 12, 2015
    I liked it, it seems like they are going to experience their first 'morning after' too? Unless you decide to skip it
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 12, 2015
    This story is incredibly hot, and also fairly sweet with the way Sarah is obviously starting to develop feelings for Chuck, as much as she avoids thinking about it. Keep it coming!
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  • From Mufc87 on October 11, 2015
    Excellent chapter. Hot sex as usual but certainly upped the hotness in the last chapter. Can't wait to see the conversation they have when they wake up next to each other, knowing Sarah she will probably pull away. As usual can't wait for more, still my favourite story on here.
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  • From ERC on October 11, 2015
    Another hot chapter and it looks like Sara will stay the night since they are both drunk I just wonder how they will feel in the morning
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  • From ANON - anon on October 08, 2015
    I'm hoping things start to develop a bit faster from now on. I was actually a bit disappointed when Chuck agreed to be just fuck buddies many many chapters ago, it seems to me that things haven't changed too much since then, there's just sex and more sex which can get a bit boring no matter how well you write it.

    I think you're a very talented writer but perhaps (and I might be completely wrong about this) you don't trust your own ability to keep the readers interested if you cut down the amount of sex and focus on character/relationship development. If that's the case, let me assure you, you got nothing to worry about.
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  • From ANON - Lori on October 06, 2015
    It wasn't much, but I like that Sarah's finally starting show some signs of maybe thinking about wanting to be more than just sex partners. Or maybe "think" isn't the right word, it's still unconscious at this point, but at least it's some progress.

    While I like well written Chuck/Sarah smut a lot I'd be happy to see their relationship progress at a bit faster pace than what we've seen so far. I wouldn't even mind if you didn't include sex in every chapter but instead focused of their feelings for each other. The story is of course yours to tell as you prefer but I think it would be a good time to have Chuck and Sarah (especially Sarah) reconsider things!

    Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 05, 2015
    Since this chapter is broken into three parts...

    Part I
    "I wondered how much of this was teasing. Did Carina actually enjoy hearing Chuck and I fucking over the phone?"

    OK, this was a little unexpected but can we dare to hope that Sarah considers sharing Chuck with Carina at some point?!

    I find that hard to believe... Yet intriguing... If maybe she's trying WAY too hard to prove to Carina (and herself) that Chuck is JUST a FB...

    Either way, love the Sarah-Carina interactions.

    Part II
    Sarah stalking him at Buy More was adorable. She so smitten! The quickie in the office was great but I mostly liked her thinking that she didn't want to leave.

    Chuck checking their relationship status ("And with us…being the way we are…I mean, our thing isn’t like…a regular thing, so…") was also adorable.

    And perfect. I can't see him challenging the status quo, even as much as he clearly wants to, but he can give her an opportunity to speak up if she's willing to make the leap. Unfortunately we only got an "exactly" from her this time...

    And of course the way he calls her "beautiful".

    Their entire dialogue here was great.

    Part III
    Then Sarah second guessing everything prior to their Whiskey Date. Including that relationship status. She really is terrified of being hurt, isn't she?

    And then he "accidentally" cooks her dinner. Or is he being slick?

    Well, this turned into running commentary at some point but I really like the nuance to the story in addition to the sex scenes. Can't wait to see what Sarah has in mind.

    And...
    Finally, I wanted to share that I HATE first person narration. But yours reads really smoothly and I find I am not bothered by it at all. You haven't entirely changed my mind about first person but you have proven that there are exceptions. That's a bigger endorsement from me than it sounds like. Just a really smooth and engaging read all around.

    You can't really do a FB story and gloss over the sex but this balance between story and sex is fantastic. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - excusemyfrench on October 05, 2015
    Thanks for the update! I'm glad their relationship seems to be moving forward. I'm hoping for more scenes when they're together and not having sex, which is a strange thing to say in a smut story review, but still...I guess that's the whole point of this storyline, besides the hot sex :)
    Hope you update soon, because the end of the chapter left everybody hanging, especially Chuck and Sarah.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 05, 2015
    Loved the 69!!!! I love this story. Keep up the great work. Their chemistry in this story is awesome. Thank you! Can't wait for more. Germai
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  • From ANON - CT on October 05, 2015
    Haha love that Carina heard them, surprised she only teased as much as she did. I also liked that Sarah is starting to think about Chuck and a relationship, even if it's in her worry to think things would change. It will be good when she sees it doesn't have to be.

    You're right that the chapter ended kind of abruptly but looking forward to the continuation.

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  • From ANON - jtc on October 05, 2015
    Good chapter (10) once again.

    My biggest problem with this story (that I've still liked a lot) has been the fact that Sarah has been a bit too stuck on her "we're just fuckbuddies" view and never stopped to re-explore if that is what she really wants. I guess I don't find her actions 100% realistic on that front. Sarah wanting to talk to Chuck about her solved cased first before anyone else was a positive sign, and I hope that now things start to move faster on that front. Don't get me wrong, the sex scenes you write are incredibly hot but even those can get a bit repetitive if their relationship stays otherwise stagnant.

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