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By : MoreCharahPlease
  • From KnightRider on October 04, 2015
    Another great one! The part where Sarah really considered how much Carina enjoyed listening to them have sex got me curious. Will we see a threesome in the future? Looking forward to the next chapter, sounds like it should be pretty hot.
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  • From ANON - another fan on October 04, 2015
    So damn hot. I'm on fire reading these sex scenes. I love all of it. Just the right amount of dirty talk. Not that I'd be upset if there was more. I especially like Sarah asking for more. Lot of people sort of requesting things, and so I'll join in. Not that I'll blame you if I don't see it, obviously. But I think it'd be really hot to see them having angry sex. I know that is a little Ooc for Chuck, but maybe role playing? And in your summary, you said there is bondage but Sarah hasn't whipped out those cuffs yet. Just saying. wink!

    This is just flawless erotica. Better than titillating. I want to go out and find my own fuck buddy now. Just to get rid of the lust I have in me after reading this story. Wow. More Charah please??? wink!
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  • From Mufc87 on October 04, 2015
    Another great chapter. Can't wait for the next one as it seems it could be wild. Hopefully you update quickly.
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  • From ANON - Heemeyer on October 04, 2015
    This is a story I check a couple times a day to see if it's been updated. That's how much I dig it.

    Honestly, I'm not huge on first-person, and have a hard time cranking one out to that style, but it's still a quality story.

    Can't wait for more, son. P.S. - You write quality Sarah blowjob passages.
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  • From ANON - MCP fan on October 04, 2015
    So excited to see Chuck and Sarah doing the 69. I feel like they must have done that all the time in canon. And wow, the sex in Chuck's office was so hot. I hope you write more about them doing it there. Maybe after hours, Chuck closes the place down, disables the security cameras, and they screw on a dryer or something. Just a small request? I really like it when Sarah's in control, so if you could work more of that in, I'd love it. Not that this is lacking in Sarah-control. But just saying, I really love that. I like any sex scenes you write, but that'd be great.

    I really like how you make cocky-Chuck fuel Sarah's need for control. Like she gets so turned on by it that she just wants to ride the hell out of him. And then she does ride the hell out of him.

    And, like some others have said, I'd love to read about them having anal sex. I respect that you're taking things slowly because this is your first time writing erotica, and they're taking it slowly because they're both trying to explore. But they did have that convo, so it would be interesting to see how they go about broaching the subject of anal. Who would bring it up? Her or him? (My guess is she would.)

    Anyways, please keep it up. You're my favorite author in any fandom. So so so so hot. And if you write anymore sex one shots, I'll read those too. Just saying. ;)

    Thanks! I'm your biggest fan!
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  • From ERC on October 04, 2015
    I Guess my theory about Chuck being the killer is wrong since in this chapter a man was arrested unless there is a plot twist coming but I hope the rest of the story is just hot sex between Chuck and Sara. The part where Carina listens to them having sex is so Carina even in this AU story
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  • From Agravain on October 04, 2015
    Wonderful! Always looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - CT on September 22, 2015
    Good chapter, curious about the phone call obviously, but also interesting to see when Sarah relaxes her "rules", spends the night with him and actually sleeps etc
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  • From ANON - excusemyfrench on September 22, 2015
    Thanks for updating! Another great chapter.
    I really like where their sexual relationship is going, even if I'm getting a little frustrated with the slow-moving emotional one.
    Some reviewers got me scared that you're gonna turn Chuck into some kind of killer, hope it's not where you're going cause it would be very OOC :)

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  • From ANON - Anon on September 21, 2015
    Oh shit what was the phone call?! Great f'ing chapter! I loved the phone sex! I also love how they are comfortable experimenting with each other. But my faves was how chuck finished the night. I love to read about a guy not afraid to go down on a women
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  • From ANON - anon on September 21, 2015
    Wow! Good story! Is Carina the newest murder victim?
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  • From ANON - Heemeyer on September 21, 2015
    Uh oh spaghettios, what happen?! Hopefully it will lead to more fucking. And Chuck and Sarah becoming official.
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  • From KnightRider on September 21, 2015
    Uh oh cliffhanger! As always another awesome chapter. Always happy when I see this story has been updated. Can't wait for the next one!
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  • From ERC on September 20, 2015
    Another hot chapter love it I but I hope I am wrong but I hope you don't make Chuck the killer that Sara is looking for of course there is no evidence pointing that way just a feeling I get
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  • From ANON - tam on September 20, 2015
    This is just top notch erotica. Sometimes I find stories here that are too much for me, and I end up being a little grossed out and have to leave the story. Just not my style at all. But this is just so hot. I feel it between my legs when I read it. And I'm able to actually imagine it without being weirded out...? I don't know how else to explain it. BEing able to imagine a couple screwing when you read it without thinking it's corny. This isn't corny at all. It's just really freaking sexy. Big big compliment. Thanks so much for this, it's my favorite story ever honestly.
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