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Reviews for Just A Game

By : MoreCharahPlease
  • From ANON - ehd on May 07, 2016
    all you have to do is talk to a hacker and you'll know how to present Chuck as one. it's not hard. whatever, it seems like it's fine. most of the people who read this story wont know the difference like you don't. but it seems like not a lot of people are still reading or reviewing this story anymore so oh well. guess you shouldve thought about that before getting fussy about negative reviews though.
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  • From ANON - wow on May 03, 2016
    Ok I never leave reviews on this site and i know that makes me bad. but i had to leave one for this story. i just happened to see how popular it was in the tv tab so i literally stayed up all night reading all of the chapters and this is just so so good. i could not resist leaving a review. you need to know just how good this story is. i hope all your other reviews are just as positive. you deserve money for this story but i know that isn't possible. if you ever published anything original, i would buy ten copies. thanks for this story MoreCharahPlease
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  • From ANON - anonymous guy who loves mcp on May 03, 2016
    Only thing that really bugs me about this site is that there is no way for me to get alerts when my faves update. That's okay. You're the only author on here that I will check every single day to see if you've updated. I'm just so obsessed with your storytelling and your sex scenes. This isn't meant to be a dig on other authors cuz this is just about my own personal preferences, but I love that I can read every chapter and trust that the sex will be so freaking hot, dirty, playful, fun, and a total turn on...without making me uncomfortable. I really love reading erotica, but it's really rare I can find something that isn't about Sarah getting raped and ending up liking it or something similar to that, and that just makes me click away so fast. You're trustworthy, MCP. I really appreciate that. There's sweetness and real heart here. And then the sex between Chuck and Sarah is just electrifyingly sexy. As a guy, I have to say, nothing is hotter to me than reading about a woman enjoying sex the way Sarah enjoys it with Chuck in your stories. Maybe that's just me. Anyway thank you. I have not reviewed any other chapters and I felt bad so I gave you an entire novel here hopefully to make up for it. I'll be back though. You deserve more reviews and all the readers! Thank you MCP.
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  • From ANON - Mufc87 on May 03, 2016
    Superb chapter as usual. The sex was hot and I like how Sarah's finally realising how good they are together. Not just in the intimate way, but in all ways. Seems like they are really getting close and connecting on all levels. Hope we get to see them on a romantic date soon, that would certainly be another level in their relationship. As to your other story, I wouldn't mind if you continued it sometime, I really enjoyed the partners in arms idea and that could b an interesting story as well.
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  • From Dominic_Flandry on May 03, 2016
    Hacker? No. But as someone who has to know something about it, computers and programming I can tell you that people like me have to suspend our disbelief constantly or go nuts. The only exception is a series of thrillers written by a man who knows more about the low level guts of Windows than almost anyone. You do well on that part. And I really do enjoy this story in general. One of my absolute favorites.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 02, 2016
    Thank you for another new chapter. I love how they moved to another level in their relationship. Great chapter. Thanks!!!
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  • From ANON - anon on May 02, 2016
    Please please update? I know some of the reviews might be getting you down. Or not. Either way, so many of us still read and love this story. I really want to see the next chapter! Thank you!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 29, 2016
    Can not wait for the next chapter.
    Hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 27, 2016
    I miss you! I hope you post soon.
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  • From ANON - Pineapple on April 24, 2016
    Still loving this story. Please don't give up on it.
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  • From ANON - JoeBob on April 18, 2016
    Enjoyed the chapter. Lots of hot sex. Sarah trusting Chuck enough to allow him control is huge. Maybe it's time for him to blurt out an ILY and freak her out. :)

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Ehoh on April 18, 2016
    pretty good yo
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  • From ANON - Mufc87 on April 17, 2016
    Excellent chapter. The smut was hot the plot progression was nice. They really seem to be connecting on all levels now, nice to see Sarah so willing to move forward with chuck. Hope you continue with your writing, as your stories are the only ones I read on this site.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 17, 2016
    Thank you for coming back and posting another great chapter. I don't read the other reviews so I don't know what they are saying. Please ignore and continue. I may self am guilty of posting harsh reviews on other stories, but then realized if I don't like it then I need to shut up and stop reading. You can't please everyone. But you are pleasing me with this story! Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 17, 2016
    So glad you updated. A lot of sex, you write it well but it's key to character growth of sarah.
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