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By : MoreCharahPlease
  • From ANON - Anon on March 14, 2016
    Don't have a lot of time but just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this chapter and the story as a whole. Stay the course, I really look forward to reading your updates each time they come out
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 14, 2016
    Thank you! I have been missing you! So yes no labels, but wow that really is a big step for them. I have to say I am still enjoying this story so much. I can't wait until the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - CT on March 14, 2016
    Loved parts of it and hated others. Don't like that Chuck went over there and i also didnt like how harsh sarah was being. I really felt that Chuck needed to find someone else and let Sarah deal with that on her own. You mention how the both of them now agreed to be honest but sarah still isn't being it to Chuck. I guess overall I've stopped shipping the two of them in this story. I like your writing style and i like how you write their 'friendship' but i dont think they belong together at all. At the end of the day they want completely different things. Their conversation was good in many ways but it was too much about Sarah and her feelings and not about Chuck. He can't live on her schedule, he's just gonna get his heartbroken.
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  • From ANON - Mufc87 on March 14, 2016
    Loved the latest chapter. Think you had Sarah acting right, prepared to give chuck a chance but not yet brave enough to put a label to it. It's nice that chuck at least gets a chance o prove to her that he's different from other guys, and that dating him will be a good thing. Look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - JoeBob on March 13, 2016
    Nice chapter. In the show I've always thought that Sarah didn't feel worthy of being loved. One of the most haunting images from the show was in Chuck vs Sarah when she is crying on the mission log. "I'm in love with Chuck Bartowski and I don't know what to do about it." I feel some of that same desperation here.

    Thanks for writing. I hope things start going better for you in RL.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 04, 2016
    Really looking forward to the next chapter even if Sarah has started to annoy me in this story.

    There's a few things I don't like. 1. her giving out her number to another guy regardless of whether she is gonna call him, the moment she gave it to him she thought about it. 2. her attitude, one phone call without actually saying sorry doesn't count as 'trying' to fix things between them. She said nothing relevant. The 3rd thing is this, something she said:

    And it was all too clear by his actions that day, and by a few of our interactions in the lead up to it (it had to be said), that he had started to see me as his girlfriend."

    "But it was up to me to get my footing again, since I was the one unwilling to take that extra step, unwilling to truly put myself out there for a real relationship."

    "I needed to talk to him. I needed to reiterate where I stood, but apologize for coming at it as hard as I had."

    This is why it is impossible to sympathize with her. If she truly believes that Chuck sees her as a girlfriend, then she should be ending the 'relationship', nothing she says will change that, nothing. She doesn't get to control his feelings. If she doesn't want a relationship, she stops sleeping with Chuck, end of.

    And this part...."But it was up to me to get my footing again"...."I needed to talk to him. I needed to reiterate where I stood."

    No she doesn't, she made herself perfectly clear. She doesn't want a relationship, he does. Reiterating her stance on the two of them means absolutely nothing (or should) if Chuck feels differently. They don't just start sleeping together again because she's "made sure" that he is aware of her feelings. Things don't just get to happen on her time. Their sexual relationship cannot continue if the two of them feel different about it, and she can't force Chuck to view it the same way, it just doesn't work like that.

    I feel like you've written yourself in a corner. Maybe I'm wrong, but I think it's very difficult to realistically explain why they start sleeping together again considering the 2 of them view the situation completely different.

    Maybe the delay is just because you're busy (i hope so), but I wouldn't be surprised if you were struggling to write past this.
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  • From ANON - Leo on March 03, 2016
    AGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH I EXPECTED A SWEET AND SAPPY REUNION
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  • From ANON - Elly on March 01, 2016
    "I wanted Chuck Bartowski the fuck buddy and I wanted Chuck Bartowski the friend."

    That right there was the most telling line in the chapter. Oh Sarah, you're in denial. Well written.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on February 27, 2016
    These last two chapters have taken the story to a whole new level. I know you want this story to have plenty of sex, but with the focus on plot it has become far better than before (and I've liked it up to this point too). If anything, I feel that this story might have suffered a bit because you've done your best to make sure every chapter has sex in it, but it's your story so do whatever pleases you.

    I just want you to know that you're a good writer and you can keep us interested with less sex scenes and more plot progression. Now, carry on, can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Heemeyer on February 19, 2016
    These plot-heavy chapters have been goooooood shit. It's like love in an elevator - I'm livin' it up as I'm goin' down.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 19, 2016
    He/she did it to highlight the difference between those critical of the story and those who attack people for having a different opinion, it's not even remotely the same thing?
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  • From ANON - LOL at lolfan on February 18, 2016
    You just did exactly what you berated them for doing ^

    Hahahaha! Amazing.
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  • From ANON - lolfan on February 18, 2016
    lol 'fan'....while what you say is true, the truth of the reality is completely wrong.

    The difference between the people who dislike the current chapters/characterization is that they are STICKING to talking about the ACTUAL story where it seems like anybody who 'likes' the story spend more time talking about the PEOPLE who DISLIKE it rather than the story itself.

    If people like the story great, but let people dislike it or share their criticism. Nobody here is attacking anybody for talking about how much they like the story but people are sure as shit having issues with anybody who dare dislikes certain parts of it.

    A bit hypocritical no?

    If you like the story then talk about what you like, you don't have to 'defend' the author by attacking anybody with a different opinion.
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  • From ANON - Excelsior! on February 17, 2016
    Great job again, these last two chapters have been fantastic. Thumbs up for keeping Chuck and Sarah from having sex in this chapter, it just wouldn't have felt right. I hope that Chuck continues to resist the temptation, it'd be disappointing to see him fall back in the old fuck buddy routine. Maybe he can focus on being a good friend to Sarah, seems like she could use one right now.
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  • From ANON - fan on February 17, 2016
    Just like anyone is allowed to disagree with parts of the story, I feel like I should be allowed to defend the author. Just like some of the other readers have.

    So don't slam those of us who agree with MCP's choices, if you expect us not to slam you for disagreeing.

    Great chapter, MCP! Really love this so far. And I'm curious about where this break-in and invasion of privacy is leading. The plot thickens!
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