Reviews for Just A GameBy : MoreCharahPlease |
Please write more soon.
Damn that was hot, and so worth the wait. Can't wait to see where you go with this next. Hopefully it doesn't take as long to update the next chapter. Looking forward to reading more.
Hope to see an update soon
Sarah has to so surprise Chuck sometime in the future and let him come on her again.
I feel like Carina has to catch them in the act, and not freak out like Ellie did haha
This story is so good! I really enjoy it and I'm glad to hear it's going strong!
Thanks and Happy New Year!
Awesome chapter! Thanks!
So happy you updated this, it's seriously the only thing I come to the site for, and I had to do a double take when it said there was a new chapter. Keep it up, looking forward to reading more.
Really liked this chapter. True you focused on the sex but in the middle of some really steamy action you put in some pivotal moments in the plotline. There were moments between them that were monumental, well at least for Sarah they were. She's clearly beginning to see she has fallen and fallen very hard for the nerd. And what is so important for her growth is she is just fine with it and relishes it. She wants to grow and she sees Chuck as a very significant vehicle for that growth. It is allowing her to come to terms with the rat bastard and how insignificant he actually is. But what you subtly hinted at is there is something, very secret and very private she is holding back but she is on the verge of sharing it with him and how it is handled will I believe be the key to what happens between them. Really great storytelling in a chapter based almost entirely on some great hot sex! Well done!
excellent as usual. The sex was hot, and the emotional connection grew even more. It's nice too see Sarah finally admitting to herself at least that chuck means so. Much to her. Can't wait for another update.
It should have gone straight on her face haha, I liked how much the shower meant to Sarah, sex scenes were naturally good, nice to see an update
Happy to see you back. Thank you for focusing on the sex!!!!!!!!!
Just amazing! You do such a great job showing the deepening emotional conection between Chuck and Sarah. The sex is amazingly hot and your chapters are always worth the wait. Looking forward to the next time.
Great work so far. Hvae you thought about putting your work in fanfiction.net ? you'll get maybe more recognisition there, and more people will find your work. Just a thought, keep up the good work though and happy holidays.
Please continue this story. The sex is good but the story is great.
Really hope you update this soon, I keep coming back here everyday to check. It seriously is one of the best Charah fics out there.
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