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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on October 12, 2015
    Poor Tom . That's really embarrassing to go through . Dennis sure scored some major brownie points . It was nice of him to help Tom when he needed it . Now he has a friend in Tom . Dennis proved himself to be a good person who showed compassion and kindness when he could've been a really big jerk and made fun of him. He was above that and helped Tom . Great chapter . Hmm mm can't wait for the fun to start .
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on October 08, 2015
    Okay so I was reading this while listening to van Halen's
    Jump . Really put me in the mood to enjoy it . Poor Tom , he should have let Dennis kiss his boo boo to make it better . Their interaction with each other was sweet , Tom expecting Dennis to make fun of him , but instead he showed concern towards the younger officer . My favorite part was when Tom flirted with Booker . Priceless ! I'm sure Dennis did Ole Cletus proud ! Also the tension between them was thick enough to cut with a knife . In other words this chapter kicked butt! I loved it. Next pwease!
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on October 04, 2015
    This story is getting pretty good . Booker and Hanson have their work cut out for them.Of course , it doesn't help that Dennis is antagonizing Mcarter like that. I'm thinking he just couldn't help it . Sigh but look were it got him . On Tom's bad side . Oh uh. On the other hand they did a good thing for Harold. Mr.Horshack is like a sparrow among peacocks ,I like that comparison . Harold feels like he might be like Mosco. I hope he appreciates Dennis and Tommys help. My heroes !
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 04, 2015
    I am absolutely loving this story so far. The friction between Hanson and Booker is brilliantly played out and I can almost picture the looks on their faces. I'm looking forward to seeing where you are going to take this story.
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on September 29, 2015
    Yet another chapter well done ! I like the light hearted humor in this chapter.I quest Dennis is gonna have to try harder than that to get a reaction out of Tom. Lol , he's too smart for Booker . Tommy was thinking with his head and not his fist.As for Dennis , he cracks me up. Going back to his room plastered . I can only imagine that goofy grin on his face! I kinda feel bad that he likes Tom ,who can blame him? Heh, he is beautiful . Officer Hansome-I mean Hanson is a cutie . Wondering how they'll start their day . Until next chapter . Huggles !
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on September 24, 2015
    Yet another chapter well done ! I like the way the two boys interact . Kinda like a love /hate relationship . Dennis loves to tick off Tom ,while he hates his aggravating attitude . Those two look like they have it bad . So funny that they don't know it. I felt bad for Dennis when Tom told him that he didn't have any real friends . It was mean ,but at least he tried to apologize to Dennis . This is getting so good . I can't wait to see how this continues ! I really like !
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on September 18, 2015
    I'm so hooked on this all ready ! My goodness that Dennis can sure drive Tom crazy. Of course with those looks , he's allowed to make people crazy . Me thinks Tom is just a little confused as to how to react to the hot babe-I mean Dennis . You got wanting more of this story. If it's anything like your other stories ,I know it's gonna be damn ed good. Can't wait for the next chapter . And of course I giving two thumbs up ! I'll be waiting ,bea.Huggles !
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  • From ANON - Vidalhbea on September 15, 2015
    A great start already! Can't wait to see what happens next! I can tell tell I'm gonna like this. OH and as for Dennis HONK! HONK!SEXY!
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