Reviews for Beneath a Heart of DarknessBy : OpenPage |
I'm both happy and sad ! This is such a great story from start to finish . Finally Harold came into his own and followed his own path ,not caring what his father thought . I'm especially happy for Jorge, my favorite character , he got the love he was looking for , and last but not least my two faves . Dennis and Tom , they worked hard for their own happiness , and they deserve to be happy . Tom working to be a rape counselor is a good decision . Again a great story . Thumbs up! :)
This was so worth the wait ! It's kind of sad for Tom to leave the force , but it's for the best . I'm also happy that Doug talk to Dennis and in his own Penhal way clear the air with Dennis . It was funny at the end when Doug remarks that he still thought Dennis an ass hole. Booker took in stride and was ok with it .
And the love scene between Tom and Dennis was beautiful . Dennis showed both patience and love . Dennis showed Tom he was his everything. Love it ! :))
Love this chapter. It's good to see Tom finally healing after his assault and ready to move on,but it's kinda sad that he quit the force . It's not fair ,but with his inability to trust people, he could be a danger to others and himself . Dennis got some major brownie points ! Even though he really wants to take their relationship to the next level , he cares enough about Tom to make sure he's ready . I just loved how he was honest and told Tom he was afraid of hurting him . It makes me wanna have a Dennis of my own . (Sigh) And really hoping the pi taus get what they deserve. Can't wait for the next chapter. : )
Oh the foolish things our hearts make us do sometimes . Hanson believed he was ready to seduce Dennis , but he went about it the wrong way . Poor Tom . At least Booker stopped him from making a huge mistake and possibly ruining their relationship . Although I admit it would've been hot to see them reenact the shower scene Dennis had with Jorge. But Dennis showed how much he loves Tom by not letting anything happen . Your usual , as always the best and two thumbs up ! ; )
This chapter was worth waiting for. Glad to see Tom had enough time to clear his mind, and realize that his mistake . DennisTom sounds much better than DennisJorge I think . It acually broke my heart when Tom viewed the tape of Dennis and Jorge , I felt bad . I know it hurt him to see them together , but I'm glad he came to his senses. I'm happy Tom knows that Dennis wants him and not Jorge , that they simply were manipulated . Thank God for sesame Street ! (I used to watch it all the time ) answer Now you have my curiosity piqued and wondering what Tom will do . Great chapter, loved it . Let's see what Tom is gonna do .
This is getting out of control ! That Holland is getting his way ,and without doing anything ! Boo . I just love this ! Keeps getting better with each chapter . Tom should know Dennis did the right thing by calling Fuller , he may not like it , but it was the right thing to do . Now as for Dennis confession, damn ! He did the right thing also . Poor Tom . But he would've found out eventually . Hope they work it out , they just have to! On a side note poor caddy ,it wasn't necessary for Dennis to abuse it . : (( thumbs up
I just love this story ! Holland is finally gonna get his . I hope lupita can help Tom and Dennis . Glad to see he (Holland)lost some of his smug attitude. It was high time somebody put him in his place , or knock him down a peg as Tom did . Good for him ! I kinda panicked when Dennis had his anxiety attack, but he pulled through just fine . Yes another great chapter, and thumbs up!
Alll I can say is I loved it ! I just loved the interaction between Dennis and Doug,those two are something else ! Lol. They may not like each other ,but they love Tom enough to put aside their differences . Also glad to see Dennis giving Tom the support he needs ,clearly he loves him if he's willing let Doug support him too . Two thumbs up!
Alright ! Tommy's getting ready to kick some butt ! Holland and crew won't know what hit them . I don't know why , but I was expecting the pi tau to visit him . But instead it was Fuller . Coach showed heart and he's awesome for that . He's the right man for Tommy to talk to . You also give Fuller class . I'm happy that he was accepting of Tom and Dennis's relationship. Great chapter and of course thumbs up!
I'm so glad to see Tom getting back to normal , and I know he's got a ways to go . Even if he's not one hundred percent better , he's trying to overcome his trauma , Dennis is his rock and I'm glad . It looks like both might have s happy ending . The love scene between Tom and Dennis was sweet and sensual at the same time and I adore Booker for his patience with Tom . It was a sign of love and selflessness . So yes. , a great chapter written and of course two thumbs up!
Poor Tom,just when he seems to getting better,he has s setback . But it's good to see that he's determined to get over his trauma. I'm also glad to see Dennis wants to be there for him . I hope the pi taus and Holland don't see it coming when they get it . At least I hope they do. Glad to see Hollands plan to turn Tom and Dennis against each other didn't work. Those two have a true love .
My . My . Booker showed a few facets to his personality,and I must say it makes me root for him more . He also showed that he could be the better person and decided to go apologize to Tom . To me it proves that Booker really does love Handsome... I mean Hanson . But he sure got a surprise . Tom wasn't home then came back almost naked with a equally almost naked Jorge . Yikes!! I thought for sure Dennis was gonna kill the poor guy . Again I hope Jorge finds his own Booker . I loved the way you show cased the many facets of his personality , it was fascinating. Thumbs up!!
You outdid yourself with this chapter. This was awesome! I thought for sure Jorge was going to rape Tom . Shocked but glad he didn't.That Holland ! He and the pi tau need to be brought down,(hope I spelled tau right) And poor Dennis ,not realizing the trouble Tom is in . When that guy approached him I thought Dennis was going to leave with him . I'm glad that didn't happen. He should find Tom and show him his romantic side ,I'm sure Hanson wouldn't mind . I'm also glad Jorge made the right choice , he's my hero! Sorry for rambling on but it was a great chapter.
Huggles!
Trouble in paradise ! Dennis and Tom sure have short tempers . I feel bad for both of them . While Tom has his reasons ,Dennis has his reasons too . But I guess they are too stubborn to be reasonable. Of course with them being hotheaded . Poor Dennis hope he gets his Tom ,and I hope Tom gets his Dennis. I must say ,I'm surprised at Dougs reaction . He seemed levelheaded . He showed that he just wants Tim to be happy . A true friend . I was surprised by Jorge's visit ,but it has me question his motives for taking to Tom . I'm wondering what he wants with Tom . Great chapter and really looking forward to the next.
Huggles!
As usual another chapter that rocks ! I'm just amazed by the Dennis and Tom interaction. It just seems so real . I love it ! The way. Dennis treated Tom ,like someone he cherished . It just melted me and made me wish for my Dennis. The ending to the chapter was unexpected . Poor Doug ! He seemed to feel bed after accidentally punching Tom . Of course Dennis didn't help. So two thumbs up !
Huggles much !! :)
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