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By : MV007
  • From SherlockHolmes on February 09, 2018

    please continue and update this story!


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  • From ERC on June 18, 2016
    just curious it's been over a month do you plan on adding additional chapters
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  • From ERC on May 21, 2016
    Hope you update soon you are off to a great start
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  • From ANON - Earnie on May 15, 2016
    Hope you update soon how about Ellie/Sara in a lesbian encounter or a 3 way with Devon with Chuck secretly watching and maybe join in I know all the guys her love Sara but Ellie is hot too and deserves to have some fun
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 14, 2016
    Maybe carina was able to seduce chuck after he learnt about Sarah and Bryce.
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  • From ANON - MoreCharahPlease on May 13, 2016
    Hey, I thought I would come return the favor after you reviewed my fic. This was a good read! You know I love Charah sex, so this was a welcome chapter for me to read. And I liked that there was a thread of the struggle and emotion between them, in spite of her going through with blowing him.

    Thanks for writing, mate!! (Sorry I didn't sign in. On a different computer and forgot to, and now I'm too lazy!)
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 13, 2016
    Thanks for the story! Good situation to put them in.
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  • From ViciousHand on May 12, 2016
    Excellent story.

    As you are accepting ideas about other characters, it would be good to see some Ellie action. Agent Forrest, Vivian Volkoff, even Heather Chandler would make for great scenes.
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  • From Ride_clyde on May 10, 2016
    Awesome story and awesome concept, the reviews are as good as the story! I think that it will be amazing just to see what story ideas people have. Might steal a few myself. How about showing some love for General Beckman. Old people like sex to! ;)
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  • From KnightRider on May 10, 2016
    Awesome story. Always wanted to read an insert for the Masquerade episode where Chuck was right and the party is an orgy. Obviously they participate.
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  • From ANON - It was merlin on May 10, 2016
    Good start , very hot and I don't even read much Chuck/Sarah when it comes to smut . Not sure on ideas but someone mentioned Morgan using the intersect to seduce Sarah . Would like to see someone else tackle the troll for a one shot haha . Also think if you want to test your skills , the suggestion of Sarah fucking Chuck when she hasnt got the memories would be good . If you go down the route of her remembering you could have a sweet/hot/ emotional scene . I reckon you could nail . Good job my friend
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  • From ANON - Q on May 09, 2016
    A few more:

    After Chuck and Sarah get together, Chuck admits he's jealous having watched Sarah use her seduction skills to pick up marks like Cole over the years. So Sarah picks up "mark" Chuck in a hotel bar.

    Does the interest have sex skills? The world wants to know.

    Semi-retired from the spy life, Sarah still loves to act and roleplay (with Chuck and maybe others).
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  • From ANON - Q on May 09, 2016
    Great start to a hopeful collection to various one-shots. So well developed and written, very much true to the characters.

    Since I'm a Charah fan at heart most of my suggestions tie into the two of them together (plus others):
    Sarah after she loses her memories actually sleeps with Chuck (her mark) in the bedroom massage scene. Will sex bring her memories back?

    S and C have to go undercover at a fetish club or C really gets to learn what actual orgies look like.

    C and S's wedding night - all the details.

    A good Chuck/Sarah/Carina threesome - when it's good, it's so hot. What better that having your boyfriend and BFF together in bed?

    Chuck becomes an honorary member of the CATS - complete with (sexual) initiation.
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  • From ANON - Guest on May 09, 2016
    If I remember correctly, in season 4, Sarah comments on what goes in an orgy. Maybe you can write a back story in which the whole CAT squad participates in an orgy. Just make the sex dirty and rough.

    - Another scenario, in season 1, Lester hits on Sarah, but instead of chickening out he actually fucks Sarah.

    - Quinn and Sarah, celebrating successful completion of a mission or maybe since he was Sarah's handler, he uses his position of authority to his advantage.
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  • From BCC1 on May 09, 2016
    As sexual encounters between Chuck and Sarah go, this was a masterpiece. Absolutely spot on with how I would think Sarah and Chuck would be in that sort of situation and at that time in their relationship. Great to read something that shows Chuck the nerd in a "realistic" fashion rather than the sexual God that he is normally written as. And also very glad to read Sarah as the experienced half of the pairing who takes control and does what is required, albeit while handling issues of her own. You did credit to both of them! Thankyou! Some of the previous reviwers have some excellent ideas regarding future scenarios - I do hope you take some of them up :-)
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