Reviews for Alexis's Day OffBy : Redfields |
I look forward Hayley eating the "strawberry tart", also Alexis's encounters with her babysitter Rina (Katrina) Say Teaching Alexis, Reconnecting during "Inventing the Girl"
And of course after Paige gets to drunk Alexis decides she needs to be punished
Hey I love this story it's great is there any chance we could get a part three where Beckeett is the submissive willingly (maybe even a slave) and Alexis is the Dom maybe at Beckett place where Alexis has got Beckett to buy alot of BDSM toys (strap-ons,plugs, whips a collar) you uses her for her pleasure and Becketts (Because she served Alexis).
I think this would be a good story because there a lot Kate as Dom but I've never seen a Alex as dom. Maybe get another of the other women Alexis' sub maybe how lanie get taken as Alexis'sub
I would love to help you develop this if you decide to add to this I don't know if you already have a beta but if you need any help you can contact me at tobybarrows@googlemail.com
More Alexis and Kate, please!!!!
Play up the teenage part, and make it as dirty as possible.
Erase all the guilt. Kate should just go to town on Alexis's body, fuck her for all she's worth, relishing in the fact that she's 15 and gorgeous.
Loved chapter 2. It's so freaking hot to imagine little Alexis Castle butt fucking Kate Beckett. Would love some more of that. Or better yet Beckett returning the favour and taking Alexis's anal cherry. Either way would love to read more about these two having an ultra-forbidden affair.
Great story, I like a dirty and horny Alexis. How about a chapter with Kate who caught Alexis?
Short but sweet. And very erotic.
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