Reviews for The wrong night,the wrong man.By : ItwasMerlin |
Great story . Can't wait for the next chapter
Good to see chap 9. I'm glad to hear you are moving away from the gangster storyline, can't happen fast enough for me. Hope to see more updates on this and other stories soon. Hopefully this will be more Kate/Sid/Alexis focused. I want Sid to win, no `rescues'.
I'm not one to reveiw on my own stories but for future reference if your going to reveiw can you do just that, if you want to leave me a request while i wouldnt promise anything, could you contact me via my email on my bio. Thanks
Merlin
I think Eric Doyle from Heroes would be perfect for this story.
Good but would you make a story about Underworld Selene being blackmail by Kraven or Sonja blackmail by Tani?
Really wish there was more Kate being dominated by someone half her age, against her will, but still getting off on it.
i would like Sid to meet characters from other series like Blue Bloods Det Maria Baez and Det Abigail Baker or Nicky Reagan-Boyle and Erin Reagan,Elementary Dr Joan Watson,the Mentalist Special Agent Teresa Lisbon,Sons of Anarchy Dr Tara Knowles and Gemma Teller Morrow Agent june Stahl,the Shield Agent Ollivia Murray or Corrine Mackey or Tina Hanlon and Catherine Durant,Hawaii Five-0 Kono Kalakaua.NCIS: Los Angeles Kensi Blye and NellJones.
I would like to see more story this one.
Really, REALLY enjoyed chapter 8. While I realize it may not be, would REALLY like to see Kate Beckett as Sid's whore, hating it, but truely enjoying it, while Sid has Alexis spray the drug on her dad so Sid and Kate can move into loft with Alexis and Rick...(farfetched, I know..but would solve a few problems for getting together). more than anything, tho, really like that Sid has Kate in his power and using her as a whore, with Kate liking it. Hope this plays out this way in the end...I can hope anyway.
I have this idea of a crossover story you can try about Kilgrave from before the frist season of Jessica Jones with him be a suspect sex crime that is investigate by polices and detectives from Law & order: SVU.
Will you make a sequel to this story? that will bring in characters and women from other television series like any of the Law & order or any of CSI or any NCIS or FX Networks The Shield.Bones and Rizzoli & Isles?
Moreeeeeee
Chap 8, pretty sexy. Did not like the epilogue. The drug dealers were a set-up mechanism and we don't need them back. No plot troubles please, just domination and sex. Let's focus on Sid training Kate and some more Alexis, though what he does with Kate is much hotter.
Have enjoyed every chapter thus far, but the best, for me, have been 7 and 8. Only thing could be better (for me anyway) would be weekend with Sid and Kate...where she learns to live with herself and Sid, even if he gets rid of her later)
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