Reviews for The wrong night,the wrong man.By : ItwasMerlin |
Moreeeeeee
Chap 8, pretty sexy. Did not like the epilogue. The drug dealers were a set-up mechanism and we don't need them back. No plot troubles please, just domination and sex. Let's focus on Sid training Kate and some more Alexis, though what he does with Kate is much hotter.
Have enjoyed every chapter thus far, but the best, for me, have been 7 and 8. Only thing could be better (for me anyway) would be weekend with Sid and Kate...where she learns to live with herself and Sid, even if he gets rid of her later)
More more more more more more more
Please ???!!
Good chapter, keep it up.
Hey, how are you doing lately. I liked this chapter!
Okay wow this story is great , best non con Castle I've ever read . I'm intrigued what's going to happen with Alexis . Is it weird I want her back with Sid but the two of them happy yet fucking Beckett together? Surprisingly I like your oc Sid.
Keep up the good work Merlin, can't wait to see what you and your requester cook up next.
Kate tries to resist in vain, both satisfy their pervert side. Alexis misses Sid and now those guys are going to blackmail her. i like this story more and more, congratulations.
Hey, this is wanon2015.
i really enjoyed this chapter.
hope to see more soon!
I cant wait for the third hook up between Kate and Sid. Will Sid record to Kate?, good chapter.
Sid is turning Kate into his whore, waiting for the next chapter.
Awesome story
Chap7, great stuff, I loved what you did with Beckett. He needs to have more fun with her. I wish you would not shave every girl, but so be it. Hope to read more soon.
I like this story.
Please more of Sid hate-fucking Beckett. Also Beckett doesn't need to know that she can`t get pregnant from him. If Sid in adition forces her to abandon all otherr kinds of protection it could really triggfer Kates dark kink.
And / or if Sid compells her to actually fuck random strangers .in an bar or ally ...(then the drug wouldn't doi anything for her plesure and we will see if her dark desire can compensate ;))
But in anycase pls do keep writing.
Liked the first chapters, but this chapter 7, LOVED it.
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