Reviews for The wrong night,the wrong man.By : ItwasMerlin |
A solid story for a rarely-utilised character of Alexis, especially given the setup from the show with the angel costume! I had given up hope of any continuations so this is a surprise, hopefully there's a few more to come. The initial setup then splitting to the Alexis-blackmail and Beckett indulging in the more wild desires was excellent
It does seem like in this update you've seemingly put Alexis to the side to focus on Beckett, which story-wise makes sense. But it would be a shame if Alexis has been removed entirely from the story - if Sid has sent her away, perhaps after some time she ends up going back to Damien out of need or desire, given he's a loose end? Maybe she visits Jeremy in prison trying to get closure but doesn't realise she's under his influence as well?
Still awaiting update.
Great story. Love the way you write Beckett. I hope you write more soon. This story has a lot of potential.
When I realized that Alexis wasn't going to get banged by a bunch of frat boys and some scrawy ick boy was going to have a taste..... I stopped reading. I guess other people like that she's being violated by a creep. Personally I'd rather see her ravaged by studly frat guys who know how to fuck. So once I saw that creepy boy was gonna get the benefit of the drug I stopped.... don't want to imagine that.
But I guess other people liked it.... so to each his own. None for me thanks.
Any chance of any update? Been a while.
Any chance of some updates?
I like it and can you make one with a beckett cheats with another guy or teen.
Is this abandoned?
Wow, that was great!
Interesting development, wanna to see more to know how the story would play out. I hope that we would have a chapter of threesome between Kate/Alexis/Sid
Really enjoying the story. Just wish updates were closer together, but understand you have many more to work on.
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter
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