Reviews for Cries of a ShadowBy : OpenPage |
Well I guess the date didn’t go as planned for Tom ? I feel so bad for him . Of course it didn’t help that his date was just plain mean to him . I hope Jenna spent the night alone ! So mean to poor Tom . Meanwhile Dennis was too busy chasing Carol to notice how uncomfortable Tom was . As for the talk they will have ,I’m wondering how it turn out . I hope Dennis is indeed the key to toms problems . Loved this and great chapter.
I just love to see Booker in action ! Time and time he shows what a caring human being he is . I like how he comforts Tom . Nurse Booker myhero ! I’m just wondering why would Dennis set Tom up for a date ? Hmm . So great chapter and thumbs up ! And I love guns and roses !
Will got the send off that he deserved , and Booker was right to be mad at him . Dennis was right when he told Fuller that the others were cowards , but in a way maybe that was a good thing ? Tom would’ve exploded under the pressure of them being there.
I hope Tom doesn’t decide to do something stupid ! Ahhhh !!!
What a somber chapter . Dennis just proves what a good friend he is . I’m happy he was able to pull Tom out of his grieving long enough to take care of the funeral arrangements. I’m glad you added a little humor into this . Seeing as how you described the undertaker was funny . Gonzo , I love that ! I used to watch the muppets, and gonzo was a funny muppet . Anyways,I hope Tom can get the help he needs . Another great chapter.
What a sad chapter. Tom didn’t deserve what happened to him and he seems confused. One thing I can say is that Dennis is going above and beyond being a good friend to Tom . I hope he can help Hanson . It was so sad to have him trying to clean after his brother. As for Will , well I do feel bad for him killing himself , but he had his own demons to battle , and he lost . Me like . Me like :)
Well worth the wait . Although it was inevitable that something was going to happen , it still was a surprise for this to hap pen . Maybe this was a way of atoning for his transgressions against Tom . He knew he wouldn't be able to stop , so he felt that killing himself was his only option ? I can't help but feel some pity for the man , but he had to be stopped . Poor Tom , he now has to live with his brother's actions . Hope Booker will be there for him . Great chapter , very emotional and filled with sadness . Thumbs up !!!
Oh my God ! This was good to begin with . Dennis trying to help Tom while having to deal with the uncomfortable situation he was in . But then Will comes in and wow !! I was thinking for sure he would kidnapp Tom to continue to hurt him , but then you pull this surprise ! No fair ! I was no expecting this to happen . You left me wondering what's going to happen to Tom . On to the next chapter ! Big thumbs up:)
After reading this -and rereading it made me sad . Tom has gone through so much , and yet seems to blame himself for what happened to him . It's so sad to see him at that level of pain because of someone who was suppose to protect him . Will has him thinking that he owes him sone kind of allegiance . I hope Dennis can help . Tom needs a friend now more than ever . Oh I like to reread stories , especially if they're good . So yes , this was a good chapter. You know I'm looking forward to the next chapter ! : ) big thumbs up!
Finished reading this and already can't wait for the next chapter . Booker is showing what a good friend is by helping him out , not too many people would do what he is . To me it shows strength of character . Tom is fortunate enough to have him for a friend . He also seems to be getting better , or at least moving forward . All seems calm , but i know Tom's brother is just waiting for him to let his guard down . Thumbs up ! :)
Poor Tom! He must be going through a lot . Just happy Dennis is there to help him out . I know he may not know what to say or do , but at least he is trying to help . I'm sure Tom appreciates it . The moment would have been nice if doctor Yu hadn't came to interrupt it , i know he meant to help , but he just didn't seem like the caring professional he should've been . As for Tom wanting to go back to his house , not a good idea . Then hoping for his brother to show up is just asking for trouble ! Great chapter and thumbs up .
Booker did the right thing . I knew he would do what was right and apologize fot his behaviour . His talk with Penhall was interesting ,just too bad Doug didn't go in to see Tom . The most touching part being when Booker and Hanson talked . I wanted to cry at Toms' reaction , it just reminded me of a lost boy . It was heartbreaking to see . Thumbs up!
Another great chapter and lookin` forward to the next already . Its frustrating having Tom wanting to protect Will, but he's blinded by a loyalty that Will doesn't deserve . I hope Tom comes to his senses soon before its too late . As for Dennis, I'm surprised by his behavior . I feel like he's being judgy , not that he is . I understand his reaction. Thumbs up!
I hope Dennis doesn't abandon Tom , he really needs a friend now more than ever . I just wonder why he is concerned with Will . Tom needs to realize that his brother needs help . Will is going to keep on hurting him unless Tom puts a stop to it . I was a little surprised by Dennis and his reaction , but i understand . Like i said , i hope he stays by Toms' side in his time of need , and not judge him . Great chapter and thumbs up !
I'm liking where this is going ,it's getting good! Glad Dennis is determined to protect Tom, poor Hanson needs someone to be there for him . As I've said before I don't usually read stories about incest , but you are giving it some substance to it . I like it , it's not written as mindless porn . Don't take it the wrong way , please ! This is great and look forward too the next chapter . And as for Wil , he really scares me . Hope Dennis knows what he s doing . also hope Tom can break free . Huggles!
I was waiting to see how Booker would react to finding out Tom and Will's' secret . It wasn't how I imagined it would be , but it was even better . So sad for Dennis to have found him in that state ,but Tom was found and that's all that matters . Can't wait to see what Will has in store for Dennis , I know it won't be pretty . Boy was he mad ! On to the next chapter pjease ! Thumbs up
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