Very quick ending. Somewhat satisfying but I must confess I was hoping that Chuck got to tell both Sarah and Ellie to their faces how skanky they were. I guess this way is less angst for him. I imagined him having Ellie and Devon over for dinner and drugging all their drinks with the drug Shaw used in Paris. Unable to move but still for a while able to hear and speak, they are told pretty much what your lawyer says. Chuck then produces from a bag three exceptionally large dildos, the biggest one for Devon, oops I forgot the lube, better get my rubber mallett. What? I originally thought a docking tool so that he could remove Sarah's favourite part of Devon to give it to her to carry around seeing she liked it so much.

Carina comes out a winner - do we assume she told Chuck or that it was Morgan? Hopefully she knew nothing about the affair and went to Chuck when she found out like a good friend should. Or maybe it was Morgan and Chuck just needed to get his ducks lined up before taking action. Either way - good for Chuck.

Excellent end point even if you got there more quickly than schadenfreude would appreciate.

Oh damn. What an ending!

Terrible ending. You obviously started this story with no thought on how to end it.

Looking forward to seeing how this ends. Alot of loose threads here

Interesting developments but the timing is everything. It feels like this is well before the pregnancy given that they have just been married (at about four years) and the pregnancy is at about six years. If so this means that either Morgan didn't tell Chuck for some reason - wouldn't put it past some writers here for Sarah to discover Morgan and offer to bang him to keep quiet - or Chuck is again being written as so pathetically weak that he chooses to ignore the knowledge of her (and others?) constant cheating for years just so he can continue to get laid occasionally.

Third option is my favourite. Chuck is not away on business, he is visiting Jill and his baby with a quick trip to see Hannah and his twins on his way home. Travelling of course with Lou so that he can have his usual threesome in each city. This of course only works if the mystery couple is not Ellie/Devon because whilst giving Sarah some of her own medicine might be therapeutic there is limited opportunity for him to deal out justifiable retribution to his sister and brother in law. Explaining to Sarah that he needs these brunettes because she just doesn't do enough for him might be fun.

Lay on Macduff

So glad to see you’re coming back. I can’t wait. I’d hate to admit how often I check back for chuck stories. Something about Sarah walker getting fucked does it for me. As for ideas. This is just off the top of my head. What if Sarah has to go undercover to a bachelor party to infiltrate some organization. She’s the entertainment. Chuck or Casey or both are her security. Maybe Bryce is already on the inside. She’ll have to fuck the bachelor. Maybe a few others while chuck and Casey watch. Maybe Bryce gets to join in much to chucks chagrin. For longevity purposes after the party she pretend dates Bryce to be in the organization and has to fuck around with any number of bad guys. 

Honestly though, anything with Sarah getting dick will keep me coming back every time. 

Mea culpa, mea culpa.

I just re-read my earlier comments and realised that I gave Ellie (IF indeed it is Ellie) too much credit. I foolishly said that, as she was unaware, she could still save her relationship with Chuck by kicking Devon to the kerb now that she knew who he was involved with. Upon re-reading the story it is obvious that she finds out when she is still a fiance, not married and a mother, which means she has known and participated for years. Time for Chuck to arrange for an Elana Truffaut kind of family dinner:-)

I have had some even darker thoughts as to how Chuck could get satisfaction and they are fun.

Thanks so much for the entertainment. Great to see you still at it.

Hey Irish. I really like your stuff and if you are still writing I was wondering if you could do a story where Sarah is seducing Cole Barker but actually has sex with him while Chuck is listening. Thanks and I love your stories!

RIP

Think we've seen the last of this. Maybe he's upset that Pragamtist figured out his "secret" Devon/Ellie plot twist.

I’m desperate for a new chapter. I need more slutty submissive Sarah in my life. 

OK. So it appears that it's Devon and Ellie. Or maybe I'm wrong. Anything I write from this point is just opinion. It is your story so any words or actions from any of the characters are limited only to your imagination. I am not arrogant enough to tell you what you can or cannot do. To me this realisation leads to the following - there is no future for Chuck/Sarah. That relationship is untenable as is Chuck/Devon's friendship. Ellie appears not to have known so Chuck/Ellie is salvagable provided Ellie kicks Devon to the kerb. It is one thing to have an open marriage and to join Devon in his predelictions but as soon as his desires cause great harm to her baby brother then a line is crossed. Carina's knowledge is ambiguous, hard to tell if she knew about the affair and was just surprised by the pregnancy or was surprised by the whole thing. If she knew then my previous desire to have Charina is moot because Chuck/Carina is also untenable. Boils down to choice really and having to live with the consequences of the choices we make. There is no Serum in play here so Chuck cannot reason away Sarah's guilt. She has six years of freely choosing to be a deceitful skank, even after taking marriage vows. Sarah is distraught about what she has done to Chuck, really? She is distraught because she is caught. Wepdiggy wrote a parody some years back where Sarah cut off Chuck's balls. If he has anything to do with her from here he might as well cut them off himself. Serve them to her for breakfast tomorrow. Having non stop unprotected sex with Devon(?) and making Chuck wear a condom:-) :-)

I am reading stories on AFF so I have no issue with human tastes in whatever form, it's the lying, cheating, devestatingly deceptive behaviour for which characters need to be accountable.

The only bright spot is that the baby is not Chuck's, so much messier and at least this way he finds out what she is.

Great story to provoke thought.

 I would love to PM you to deepdive the motivations but I don't know much about the site.

This is a very interesting concept. I am really hoping you let Chuck have a set of balls. Very few places in FF have him anything but whipped when Sarah does him wrong. She absolutely deserves a serious STD and to reap the consequences of her continuous actions. Not a one time mistake, if you like let her enjoy her threesome, over and over, but for her to get even a scintilla of happiness or satisfaction from Chuck from this point forward is an injustice. Maybe even let Chuck have Carina to rub it in:-)

Another excellent chapter already looking forward to the next.

Oh, a mystery!