Reviews for L.A.'s Finest - L.A.'s Finest Cum DumpsterBy : Sammycolt |
Chap 4 was very hot. A better ending would have been her partner showing up and getting boned. Sequel! Alternate reality!
Chapter 4: Excellent ending. Very hot, and I liked that Nancy still managed to end up victorious.
Thank you for writing this.
This was probably one of the hottest stories I've read for Jessica Alba and I'm saving it to my PC so I can read it again some other time. Great work!
Chap3, very hot. I hope she is pregnant. He still has one more hole to claim on his prize.
Chapter 3: Another excellent chapter. Very hot.
Kinda surprised that Beretta didn't fuck Nancy's ass 'cause I was expecting that to happen the entire chapter ;)
Personally I liked the setup; a bit of plot makes the porn more enjoyable :)
Chapter 2: Once again very hot stuff. Curious to see what humiliation is next in store for Nancy now she's completely at Beretta's mercy.
Hot stuff! I can't wait for chap3!
I definitely want more of this, it was a good second chapter!
Pretty hot, but took way too long to get to the spicey bits. Too much fighting. Well, I hope he gets to really ride her and gets away.
Excellent start. Very hot.
I like that Nancy won the physical fight between her and the thug, but that she seems to be on the losing hand when it comes to this battle of will.
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